A/N : Hello! Warriors Knight here back for 2015! Excited? Probably not. Bummed? Yea! Anyways, I know the Dark Dawn original series has gone downhill, like it's so terrible. My writing is just so bad . I know.
But during 2014 my grammar and plot ideas have blossomed! That's right, you can basically call DDR (Dark Dawn Rewritten) as the newwww Dark Dawn series.
Before reading this, I highly recommend reading the regular Dark Dawn series first. Yes, I know it's junk. I know. It's terrible tbh, but hey, everyone improves right?
Well, Dark Dawn Rewritten is basically Dark Dawn REWRITTEN! All the events that happened in DD, BR and SS is now changed?! What!? Hell yea.
And now, let's begin.
~ In ThunderClan territory, near WindClan's border ~
Bramblestar padded softly, gently, and quietly through the murky forest-growth. His tail swept under his body, being careful not to make a hushing sound. The moon's glare laid upon the lake and the land surrounding it. The night was silent, no owls, no twolegs, nothing. It was oddly quiet. Even
This could fairly be an attack Bramblestar thought. Onestar could be plotting a secret attack to kill him-
"Bramblestar. You came." Onestar said in a deep and stern voice, but also surprised. Onestar's brown coat shined in the moonlight, his eyes glowing with pride, but grief as well. Onestar took a deep and heavy sigh before reaching behind him and picking up a brown tabby she-kit in his jaws. The leaders locked eye gazes as suddenly the air got bitter and cold.
"Is this a she-kit...?" Bramblestar said in shock. His fur rose uneasily while Onestar chuckled, staring into Bramblestar's strong amber eyes.
"Yes, Bramblestar. That is my kit." Onestar mewed softly. Bramblestar looked at the tiny brown she-kit that Onestar was clutching in his jaws. Her brown tabby fur matched Onestar's, her dark blue eyes glinting in the moonlight. Confusion in her tone was dying out by the increasing noises around them. Onestar stared solemnly into Bramblestar's eyes, not breaking eye contact.
"Why did you summon me here to meet you when you have this she-kit with you, Onestar." Bramblestar asked in confusion, though his mind was racing to find out what the other tom's answer was.
"...I had a kit with Ashfoot."
"What?!" Bramblestar yowled. Onestar's eyebrows raised up in fury. "Why act so surprised, Bramblestar?"
"I just never thought-"
"Well, lets get down to business. I want you to take care of her." Onestar mewed. Bramblestar's amber eyes softened, opening up love and care to the little she-kit.
"I will gladly take her in." Bramblestar boldly mewed. Onestar nodded and pushed the she-kit gently with his nose and gestured her to Bramblestar.
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In ThunderClan territory,
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Bramblestar padded slowly through the forest with the brown she-kit in his jaws. He looked around cautiously before walking deeper into the forest. Bramblestar halted suddenly, hearing a cry of pain coming from WindClan territory. As much as Bramblestar wanted to go check out what it was, he had to bring the she-kit back to ThunderClan as soon as possible. He began moving again
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In RiverClan territory,
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Jayfeather grunted as he could feel a huge hollow log in front of him, once again. Jayfeather sighed, making his aggravation obvious. RiverClan is so stupid. Jayfeather thought as he began a rant. Swimming? Water? That is totally mouse-brained. Logs? Don't even get me started-
A loud squeal filled Jayfeather's ears as Jayfeather was halfway across the log. Jayfeather tried hard to sense where the cry came from. The loud splashing and gushing waters beneath him drained out the kit's cry for help. Jayfeather whipped his head frantically around him, thinking of what to do. He took a deep breath before jumping in the water near where the source of noise came from.
Jayfeather thrashed his paws around him, desperately trying to find the kit, but no hope. The kit let out another cry, and Jayfeather extended his paws in front of him to grab the kit's body. Jayfeather somehow managed to pull the kit close to him and carry her scruff in his jaws. He thrashed his paws upwards, trying to stay afloat. When Jayfeather finally got above water, his back hit a rock, causing his body to weaken, and then him and the kit started sinking...
I don't wanna die like Flametail...
A/N : Can you guys already tell the difference between Dark Dawn and DDR? I sure can. R&R please.