BrokenImmortal: I own nothing! Except myself


Well this story starts out with two girls skipping and singing in the park where sunshine and rainbows were shining brightly...okay maybe not.

"Damn cold, crappy, rainy and windy day" the first girl complained. She had uneven brown (dyed blonde and red streaks) hair which was shoulder length, she also had brown eyes. She was slightly chubby but not to much and she was wearing a thin jacket and had no umbrella...poor girl.

"Quiet Marie! If you had enough common sense or enough brain cells that are ALIVE you'd know to bring an umbrella" the other girl spoke. She was slightly tanned, kind of thin, she had thin dark brown hair and brown eyes, and she was slightly tall.

"But Annnnaaaa...I'm cold! And wet! And...other stuff! Besides YOU'RE what killed my brain cells in the first place!...OW!" Marie held the back of her head in slight pain "see!" Ana roiled her eyes "Let's just get to the house already" she held a DVD case in her hand "I'm so happy!" she said while clutching the DVD giving a squeal of delight. Marie moved about six inches away from Ana, slightly freaked out, she praying they got to the house fast.

It took them about a minute or so to reach the house "Hello Ana, Marie" said a woman with dark brown hair and brown eyes behind a pair of glasses "Hey mom!" Ana gave her a hug "Hey auntie" Marie smiled happily at her and followed Ana to her room, where she took out the DVD player. Ana took out the DVD and put it into the DVD player, she then pressed play, then came the intro theme

sure chikai isokgu tabi ni butsuke ai chigire au
tagai no hane no itami kanji te iru

samishisa ni yogore ta ude de daita
sore igai no nani ka wo shiranai kara

tsunagaru shunkan mezame ru eien machi kogareru

haya sugiru toki no matataki ni sara sare te
hitori de wa todo ka nai
negai nante kie sou na kotoba ja
tadori tsukenai

jitto me o korashi temo miushi natte shimau hoshi
dare no mono nimo naranai hikari ga aru

kuchibiru tashi kameru inochi no hi ga
omoi tsumeta youni mabushii kara

ai ga saki nanoka kowasu noga saki ga madowa sareru

karami au netsu no tsutae tai shin jitsu wo
dare kara mamore ba ii?
kimi ga itsuka hoshi gatta omoi ga
soko ni aru nara...

haya sugiru toki no matataki ni sara sare te
hitori de wa todo ka nai
negai nante kie sou na kotoba ja

karami au netsu no tsutae tai shin jitsu wo
dare ka mamore ba ii?
koko de itsuka hoshi gatta omoi ga

kimi ni aru kara...

Ana sang along happily, Marie looked at her "Do you even know what you're saying?" Ana still had a smile on her face and shook her head "nope" If Marie were an anime character she would have face faulted right about now, but she'd hurt herself if she tried in real life so she just sighed, then went back to watching the first episode of Gundam Seed.

Ana looked at the scene, where Fllay Shrieked at her "friends" about Sai giving her a love letter and sighed "Poor Sai, engaged to Fllay and she has an affair with Kira" Marie eyed her from the corner of her eye "How many times have you watched this?" Ana smiled sweetly and responded "a few...why?" Marie shook her head "no reason" Marie knew that "a few" meant more than 50 times, then Ana perked up "Hey Marie!" "What?" Marie looked at the taller girl "What do you think would happen if we were in the GS place?" Marie raised a brow slightly "we'd probably screw the whole place up and maybe even more" Marie took out a Pepsi and took a shot of it. Ana rolled her eyes...yet again "I wish we could be apart of the cast"

As soon as she said that, her DVD player broke "Crap!" she yelled as she saw the screen turn black "How the hell did THAT happen!" She shouted frustrated, Marie shrugged "I dunno...maybe it was some higher being telling us that we'll get sucked into a vortex and magically appear in Heliopolis and join the Archangel and help in the war between the naturals and Coordinators" she replied sarcastically. Ana glared slightly and went back to trying to fix her DVD player. The suddenly "um...Ana?" Marie sounded nervous "What?" Ana was still trying to find the DVD players problem "was there always a swirly blue vortex of doom in your closet? Marie continued to stare at the fluorescent light the vortex swirl and swirl and swirl and...you get the point.

"Holy cheese on Rye!" Ana looked at the vortex mesmerized bit the captivating shininess of it. Marie moved forward as did Ana who were to idiotic to realize they were being sucked in along with a few papers of school homework. Marie shook her head frantically trying to process the command her mind was giving her body to run, but to no avail and soon they were both sucked in along with a few items, like sketchbooks, pencils and CD players...boy, does that vortex know'em well.

"Mommy! Mommy! Mommy!" Marie shrieked as she was somersaulting in midair "heheheh dying tickles" Ana said with a grin and continued to flaot through the vortex as it closed. The door opened as Ana's mother looked into the now messed up room, she pursed her lips in displeasure at that and looked around the room for the girls, she couldn't find either girl while the T.V. came back on, the scene was showing Kira working on a computer. "Ana?...Marie?" she scratched her head in worry and wonder at Ana and Marie's disappearance.


BrokenImmortal: I'm tired so I'll stop there. I hope you all liked it, if you want me to write more you'll have to review. G'bye. And sorry for any mistakes (We love you Ana!)