The Renegade
Hey everyone this is Feralrage55 here and this is going to be my first fanfiction, so this is just a test to see if my writing skill's need more work or not. No flaming please constructive criticism helps for future stories. Now this is a Naruto fan fic and it deals with an OC that is related to Naruto along with a few others. Notice this is a work in progress so let's get on with it shall we.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto if I did Sakura would be dead due to her Banshee like voice to cause a rockslide and get crushed by a boulder. And Naruto wise and notice how Hinata feel's about.
?: Character not yet named or introduced
In thought
Demonic voice
Demonic thought
Prologue: Being cast aside
Blood….Pain….and…Betrayal. These were the things that were running through my mind at this moment. I laid here in a pool of my own blood in rain near the valley of the end. I could feel the pain from my chest as my heart rate was acratically starting to fail. I could feel my very being begin to crumble by the betrayal of someone who I considered to be family. This person's name is Kushina Uzumaki she was my adopted mother from when my birth parents wanted to give me up. I started to choke on my own blood in my throat on the memories I had with the one person I would call "Mother". My vision was blurry my hearing just about shot all to hell. I knew I was about to die so I thought it was fitting to ask the question that was on my mind.
?: Why?
To the answer to my question was just "I'm so sorry" I didn't understand, and at this point I didn't care because there nothing left for me to live for now. As I drifted off into my own mindscape knowing this would be the last time to speak with my only friend held within my body. The Jubi Kono Okami the ten tailed wolf. As I walked throughout my mind I found him laying down in the crystal lighted cave I created for him. I hated the fact when we first met that he was in a cage even if he did try to temp me with power in return at that time. As I walked up to him he called out my name
Okami: Drake…..
Drake: Roark…
The oversized wolf sighed knowing what I was going to talk about.
Roark: So you think you are going to die
I nodded my head yes knowing I didn't care if I died now. What I received for my answer was a bonk on my head from Roark.
Drake: Ow…. What the hell man!
Roark: Oh quit your whining if you must know I can heal you but you won't be hearing from me for a while because of it. I will give you another opportunity at life the people you have been around will no longer recognize you and you will more than like get their blood lines depending on who you were closest to.
I stared at him like he was crazy than I thought about it for a second and decided I really did deserve a second chance at life
Drake: Ok do it.
After I said that everything went away within a flash of blinding leaving me by myself.
Prologue End
So what do you think if you want me to keep the story going I will but it may take a while to update college application's and what not. Thanks for reading.