HIAZ, I am the legendary warror (takes out katana and cuts orochimaru in half length wise) oh and did I mention that I am COMPLETELY INSAIN??
Anyway I took over this story for narusaku69 because like many other people I wanted to see a decent ending, so I am just copying and pasteing the first four chapters so enjoy
I do not own naruto and I agree with narusaku, naruto would have a harem.
Well without further adue let the story begin!!
Naruto is with Sakura at the bridge and Kakashi just told them they had no training after they waited 3 hours for him. "Hey Sakura-chan do you want to go get ramen with me" asked Naruto. "No Naruto I don't Tsunade-sama has training and paper work for me to do" answered Sakura.
"Come on Sakura-chan the old hag can wait at least one bowel"
Sakura starts to get mad and punches him with her monstrous strength sending him flying while shouting "DON'T CALL TSUNADE-SAMA THAT!"
Naruto goes flying and crashes a few yards away. Naruto now lays on the ground starts thinking about a different girl that has been on his mind a lot more then Sakura. She was truthfully way hotter then Sakura, older then Sakura, even bustier then Sakura-chan. Naruto slowly stands up and starts heading back to the village and heading to the ramen stand.
(meanwhile)
Hana was getting dressed after her nice long hot shower and she was preparing to ask the guy she fell in love with 2 and half years ago at a party with family and friends to go out with her even if she is older then him. 'Come on girl you can do this. You know you can, you can't back down like all the other times. God why did Kiba have to invite him over and introduce us, I haven't stop thinking of him since. I even had to restrain myself from jumping on him then and ripping his clothes off and fucking him like a wild dog in heat. Not to mention how I missed him when he went away for 2 and half years...'
She got dressed in a tight gray shirt that show a lot of cleavage along with her nipples and a little bit of her hot pink bra. She also was wearing some tight black shorts. She then went out to look for Naruto and while she is walking she ends up turning the heads of every guy she passes by. Causing their wives or girlfriends to get very pissed and hits them or punishes them.
"Where can he be?"
Naruto is sitting at the ramen stand eating ramen, kinda depressed that Sakura rejected him again but has gotten use to it. "Man today is not my day." 'I'm glad Kiba got the guts to ask Hinata out, it's about time.' Hana Inuzuka walked in and sat right by him. "Hello Naruto." "uhh hi Hana-san" She orders some ramen and starts eating it and soon pays for her ramen and his, as he is finishing one and about to order another one she pulls him away quickly. "Hey I'm still eating."
She pulls him into a dark ally and pushes him against a wall and looks at him straight into never ending blue eyes. She breaths deeply. "willyoupleasegooutwithmeonadatewithmeandbemyboyfriendnaru-kun" she says very quickly. "uuhh what did you say Hana-san?" She breathes again and then slowly says "Will you please go out on a date with me and be my boyfriend Naru-kun? " He looks at her abit shocked at what she said and while he is standing there against the wall staring at her, she then starts to blush deeper then Hinata would when she was very near Naruto in her younger years. He looks at her and thinks about it and grins. "I would love to be your boyfriend and go out with you." She looks at him and smiles happily.
She pushes him against the wall and presses her chest against his body causing him to feel her erect nipple against his thin shirt since his jacket was unzipped and open. She kiss him on the mouth and runs her tongue against his lips asking for entrance which he allow and they start frenching for 5
minutes. They pull apart and Naruto grins "That was great Hana-chan, so when shall I pick you up?" She smiles at him "Lets keep it a secret for awhile, I'll come to your place with lots of ingredients and cook you up a great supper and don't worry you don't need to tell me were you live I've been there." She grins and giggles a little "In fact, I even slept a few times there and cleaned up while you where gone" She steps back and skips out of the alley and heads back to the Inuzuka house hold, leaving Naruto in the alley.
The next chapter is going to be a flashback of when they first meet.
