HEY! Ok. So this is my second fan fiction. I take constructive criticism! Not just flat out criticism. It's discouraging :'(
Anyway on with the story!
BPOV
I have been summoned to the throne room to meet my master—father. Aro is a pleasant man. In my childhood my parent were attacked and killed. My biological family and myself were unusually pale for humans. My mom and dad were thought to be the vampires that the Volturi was looking for. They weren't and I was left as a little girl, the age of six, roaming the Italian streets looking for my lost family.
Aro had heard of the mishap and myself, and asked his best tracker to track me down. He was especially interested once he heard of Jane not being able to use her power on me. She tried. I was unaffected though, and running away full of fear because my parents were being slaughtered.
I was found an hour after the incident on a park bench in a fetal position with my thumb in my mouth. I still hadn't gotten over the thumb stage yet. They offered me food and I greedily accepted, seeing how I missed dinner because of my parents' deaths. Once they came to me I realized something wasn't right but I didn't care. I felt as though I wasn't lonely anymore.
I was brought to Aro and was explained what happened and offered to be changed into a vampire, seeing as though a human wouldn't be released with this information. That is not alive anyway. I accepted but on a few conditions. One, I chose my time or I was dying, two I feed on what I want, and three I leave whenever I wish. Aro saw great potential in me and agreed after thinking it through. After that I was always referred to as his daughter and he my father. I have no mother but Jacqueline is plenty for me. And my best friend and sister, Jane, is great to. She is still kind of annoyed I am her only exception though.
I am presently opening the door to the throne room. Aro, Marcus and Caius all sit in their proper arrangements. But there was one person I have seen but don't know the name of.
He has bronze hair and… gold eyes? I thought I was the only one! He is tall too.
"Yes, thank you Edward", Aro said. With that the boy turned and gave me a confusing look. He briefly touched Aro's hand and left. Who was that…? That Edward person… No not person, vampire.
K, hope u liked. Should I continue?
-Toxic
