HURRAY! Guess what! Dark Angel Danielle Seville and I are Co writing this story please read and reveiw. OMG it's long but it's good trust me and if you like Dark Angel Danielle Seville and you trust her, read, REVEIW! I Did not come it with the name much all I did was add girl's to it and Dark Angel Danielle Seville had the rest of the name.
Caught in the middle of a Girl's Battlefield
It was an exciting day. Oh wait….that's way too boring for a beginning to a totally awesome story. Ugh….it was a freakishly, stunning, breathtaking, striking, marvelous day. There, that's a way better beginning. Oh forgot to tell you this takes place during the beginning of summer vacation.
Alvin, Simon, Theodore, and Melody were all looking forward to going to the County Fair, mostly because all the rides were free (Gosh, I wish they were free in real life *Only at Six Flags* #Wait! You have to pay to get into Six Flags! DANG!) And it was a fun thing for kids to do to celebrate the beginning of summer vacation and school being out and all. They were going to meet the Chipettes and Trever when they got there.
"Bye Dave." Theodore said. They all walked out the door and began to walk. Yes they were walking to the fair.
"Why do we have to walk?" Alvin complained.
"Because you need the exercise." Melody replied.
"What are you talking about? I'm not the one who is overweight like you."
"Excuse me?"
"Hey just saying."
"Well, I don't consider myself to be overweight, Alvin. I'm just a little chubby as all."
"Yeah I take that back, you're sort of like Eleanor size with a chest."
"ALVIN! THAT'S NOT APPROPRIATE!" Simon yelled.
"Hey, it was a compliment." Alvin said. "The only reason why Melody doesn't look that fat is because all the fat goes to her butt, hips, and thunder thighs. Not to mention she's tall."
"HEY! I DON'T HAVE THUNDER THIGHS!" Melody shouted.
"Changing subject." Theodore said. "Are you all excited to actually get to go without adult supervision?"
"Yes," Simon replied. "But Dave said we must listen to Melody and Trever."
"Oh great," Alvin snorted. "You had to bring his name in your sentence."
"Who Trever?" Theodore asked.
"Yeah, no dip Theo." Alvin said with a touch of anger. "Melody, I don't understand why you even like him. He's so dark."
"Well…" Melody said. "Whatever Trever's personality is, Alvin. It's really none of your business. Besides, you're just jealous of him because he beat you at baseball and then you were no longer captain of the baseball team. Frankly, I think that was fair. Your already captain of the football team, basketball team, and the soccer team."
"Well…..baseball was more my thing."
"Yeah right, you told me your favorite sport was football because of the cheerleaders."
"Touché."
Alvin, Simon, Theodore, and Melody walked on and turned the block and there they saw the County Fair.
"OMG! BRIT AND I ARE RIDING EVRYTHING!" Alvin squealed.
"Good for you." Melody sarcastically said with a little hand clap after. "So…..Simon?" Melody asked while they were walking to the cross walk.
"What?"
"How's your relationship with Jeanette going?"
"Fine I guess."
"What do you mean I guess?" Alvin asked.
"Well we really don't talk much." Simon sighed. "Whenever we go on a date she just listens to whatever I say. I don't know why she never talks to me."
"You just need to give her some time." Theodore said as the Chipmunks and Melody crossed the sidewalk.
"Yeah." Melody added. "Jeanette is extremely shy."
"I am well aware of that Melody. I just wish she was more…..exhilarating and a lot more uproarious and fervent."
"In English please, I don't speak nerd." Alvin groaned.
"You know more exciting, loud, crazy, and wild."
"You do realize your chances of that happening are slim to none." Melody said in a serious tone of voice.
"Yes I do realize that, Mels." Simon sighed as they walked closer and closer to the gates of the County fair. "But it is nice to dream."
When the Chipmunks and Melody entered the front gate they were told to have a nice time and enjoy the free rides. They all went to their favorite steel bench in the shade where they were to wait for the Chipettes and Trever. While sitting on the bench,
"Hey, has anyone bought money for games and food?" Alvin asked with a worried face while hoping they wouldn't have to go back home and get some because he forgot his own,
"Yes, I do have money Alvin." Simon said. "But I was saving it for Jean and I."
"Yeah, me too." Theodore added. "But I don't have enough to split amongst us."
"Now you all know that I always have money." Melody said pulling out a large amount of cash and split it up evenly. "Whatever your change is at the end of the day Alvin, give it back to me and whatever you spent you owe me."
"Oh my gosh!" Alvin said taking the money. "I really appreciate this. So this must mean you don't hate my guts?"
"Let's just say I'm in my better moods today." Melody said. "So don't piss me off."
"Dang Melody." Theodore said with a dropped jaw after he counted Alvin's half. "Three letters, A-T-M."
"How did you get all this money?" Simon said after counting the money himself.
"Let's see," Melody began. "Babysitting you three, babysitting the Chipettes, weekly chores, mowing neighbors lawns, and….."
"Okay we get the point!" Alvin interrupted. "OMG where is Brittany and the girls? They were supposed to be here at 12 and its 12 right now."
"OMG, Alvin!" Theodore said. "Shut up, they'll be here when they get here." It was then Melody began screaming hi and over hear and waving her hands up.
"Is that the Chipettes?" Alvin asked.
"No you dim rod." Melody snorted. "It's Trever."
"Why am I not surprised?" Trever then ran over and gave Melody an enormous bear hug. Alvin stuck out his tongue at his two brothers and pointed at it while making gagging noises. When Trever released Melody, Melody noticed that Trever wasn't alone. He was with another girl.
"Oh yeah I forgot to tell you." Trever said. "Everyone, this is my best friend from Michigan. Her name is Danielle, but you can call her Dani. She and I met up yesterday randomly at the ice cream parlor and I found out she's going to be staying out here in California with relatives for the whole entire summer. So I hope you didn't mind that I brought her along just to show her the County fair. We haven't seen each other in such a long time and there is so much to catch up on."
"Oh it's fine with me." Theodore said. "Nice to meet you Dani." Theodore said shaking her hand.
"Oh hi." Alvin said sarcastically but not really. Alvin thought Dani was kind of cute but didn't want Melody to know that he thought one of Trever's friends were cute and besides he had Brittany, a total hottie and captain of the cheerleading squad. Simon on the other hand didn't pay any attention to Trever and Dani's arrival. He was busy on his huge, block, 90s cell phone talking to Jeanette (THUMBS UP for giant 90s cell phones).
"Jeanette, where are you and your sisters?" Simon said in the receiver. "I can't hear you speak up…..OMG if you can't understand my directions give the phone to Ellie….. Me in a bad mood...Look Jean, meet us at the bench in the shade…See you soon….Bye." Simon hung up the phone and turned around and yelled. "SOMETIMES SHE MAKE'S ME SO ANGERY! I MEAN FIRST SHE DOESN'T KNOW WHERE SHE IS, AND THEN SHE'S GIVING ME ALL THIS LIP ABOUT HOW I AM IN A BAD MOOD! THEN…." Simon paused when he saw everyone was staring at him. Then his eye's came in contact with Dani's. Simon was hypnotized; he completely forgot about his little phone fight (YOU MEAN HUGE PHONE FIGHT) and started to relax a bit. Then in a sweet voice he said, "Who's your friend?" Before Trever could say something Dani interrupted him,
"Hi, my name is Danielle, but you call me Dani."
"I think Danielle is a beautiful name." Simon said kissing her hand. Dani blushed. "So…..who are you?" When Dani started reciting what Trever had told Melody, Alvin, and Theodore Melody pulled Trever behind the shady tree.
"Melody, you seem a little upset? Are you alright?" Trever asked.
"Give me one good reason why I shouldn't be?" She responded.
"Melody, I know what you're thinking and I'm telling you were just friends."
"Just friends?"
"Yes, now why would I break the heart of the one I like?"
"I don't know." Melody turned her head down.
"Melody, you and I both know I'm not like that. Besides, I don't even think Dani is attracted to me."
"But why wouldn't she be? I mean every single girl at school wanted to date you and still do."
"Well Melody, see for yourself." Melody and Trever then poked out from behind the tree to see Dani talking of another topic with Simon. Dani was blushing and Simon was in a trance of love. Alvin and Theodore weren't paying attention; they were looking for the Chipettes. Melody knew just by looking that Dani and Simon were smitten, she knew this was going to be hard on Jeanette. Trever then whispered in Melody's ear,
"Melody, I know that you are best friends with Jeanette and Simon is your brother but this isn't your business. I know how badly you want to go up to Simon and smack him and yell and scream you have a girlfriend."
"Geez Trever, you know, I really hate when you use your vampire powers to read me like that."
"What can I say, I am a ¾ vampire and sometimes there are times that I have to read you."
When Melody and Trever returned to the bench, Alvin started yelling,
"BRITTANY! OVER HEAR! JEANETTE, ELEANOR! OVER HERE!" Brittany ran as fast as her pink flip flops could take her and she ran right into Alvin's arms. Alvin quite enjoyed that moment frankly because Brittany looked really pretty (Alvin: Are you kidding? She looked sexy!) in her pink tube top and hot pink mini skirt. Eleanor was wearing a light green spaghetti strap tank top; she was also wearing her summer tie that read: Beach Babe, she was wearing ripped shorts along with her checkered Converse. Theodore was stuttering when Eleanor approached him. He was blushing so hard when Eleanor gave him a kiss on the cheek with her strawberry lip glossed lips. Jeanette was wearing a purple and blue halter tie dye halter top with some old jeans that were torn slightly; she was wearing dark blue go-go boots. Her hair was in a tidy bun (Obviously Brittany helped her) and she wore her purple glasses instead of her pink ones. She looked stunning. She walked over to Simon who was still looking at Dani and admiring her beautiful black hair.
"Simon?" She asked. "Simon?" She snapped her fingers and Simon was out of the trance.
"What? What's going on? Are we on a ride? Oh Jeanette, it's you."
"Look Simon, I'm sorry about are little fight on the phone, could you forgive me?"
"Yeah." Simon and Jeanette hugged one another right in front of Dani. Dani's jaw dropped in her mind that is. (OMG is that physically possible?) Dani was crushing on Simon and Simon had a girlfriend, she felt hurt. Simon and Jeanette stopped hugging and Trever introduced Dani to the Chipettes.
"I like that name." Eleanor said. "Danielle is such a pretty name."
"Yeah, they usually tell me that." Dani said.
"Well, any friend of the boys and Melody is a friend of mine." Brittany happily said.
"Same here." Jeanette said. Dani watched Jeanette, eyeing her with hatred but Dani wasn't a bad person (SHE really isn't and if you disagree you really don't get this story then) she was not the kind of girl to start something or steal another girlfriend's boyfriend, so she pushed the hatred out of her mind and stayed calm.
"Come on we're burning daylight." Alvin said. "Let's ride some rides already."
When everyone began to walk, Simon didn't hold Jeanette's hand like what all the other couples were doing….he kept staring at Dani. He liked her but then again he liked Jeanette, he was so confused.
"Okay let's ride the Tilt-A-Whirl first." Melody said.
"Don't you mean the Tilt-A-Hurl?" Alvin joked while nudging Brittany's shoulder. Melody frowned and got in a car with Trever and Dani.
"Aren't you coming Simon?" Jeanette asked.
"Ugh….I think I'll go and keep Melody company on this one."
"Company?"
"Yeah." Simon left and took a seat right next to Dani who was on his right he was on the edge so there was no one on the left. DAni was really surprised to see Simon come and sit with her, she assumed that he would sit with Jeanette but he choose her. Jeanette rushed to find a seat but she couldn't sit with her sisters and the rest of the boys because it was a maximum of 4 passengers per car. So she sadly sat alone in the ride. Through the whole rides twists and turns she was bored out of her mind.
"Where to next?" Dani said excited. Simon was standing right next to her. Jeanette just ignored this because she knew that Simon was riding the rides with Dani was because he was probably just being friendly like he always is.
"Let's ride the Power Surge!" (SERIOUSLY THE POWER SURGE IS THE BEST CARNIVAL RIDE EVER SAYS MelsLuvsAATC) Brittany squealed. For the next hour and a half of riding rides the Chipmunks, Chipettes, Melody, Dani, and Trever all headed to the game booths. Simon had not rode one ride with Jeanette but she knew he just had to win her something from the game booth.
"Step right up! Test your strength!" Yelled a man who was working the test your strength game at the carnival. Melody nudged Trever.
"You're asking me to show off." He whispered. Melody nodded with a smile.
"Oh I got to see this." Alvin said. "Nobody ever wins at the tall test your strength." Trever raised the mallet and WHACK! DING!
"We have a winner." Yelled the man. "A very strong one too." Melody picked out a giant orange teddy bear.
"You were saying Alvin?" Melody asked. Alvin just smiled and stuck his two middle fingers up right as Melody passed with the teddy bear so Melody wouldn't see that he was flicking her off.
"Hey you smarty?" Another carnival man yelled, he was talking to Simon. "Answer my riddle and you win a prize."
"Alright." Simon said laying his money down. "Give me your most difficult riddle."
"Okay, let's see.. A boy was at a carnival and went to a booth where a man said to the boy, "If I write your exact weight on this piece of paper then you have to give me $50, but if I cannot, I will pay you $50. The boy looked around and saw no scale so he agrees; thinking no matter what the carnie writes he'll just say he weighs more or less.
In the end the boy ended up paying the man $50. How did the man win the bet?"
"Hmmmmm." Simon wondered. "Oh duh, it's because the carnie wrote, "your exact weight" on the paper.
"Hey your good kid." Simon then picked out a purple and white bear and gave it to Dani. Dani was shocked to see that Simon gave her the prize, she thanked him with a friendly hug. Jeanette couldn't take it anymore she ran to the bathroom. Melody saw Jeanette and told Trever to watch everyone and meet her and Jeanette by the food stands under their bench.
Jeanette was in the stall crying her eyes out. Melody stood outside the stall and said,
"Jeanette, you've got to understand. That things like this happen."
"NO! I'm fine Melody. GO AWAY!" Jeanette replied.
"Jeanette, I know your upset but Dani's not a boyfriend stealer."
"How would you know?"
"Trever would have told me and when Simon went to ride with her on the rides she was very surprised that he didn't ride with you. Listen, Simon's just falling for someone else and that's Dani right now."
"Melody, has there ever been a time where Simon told you he wished a little something more out of me."
"Yes, he kind of wished you were exciting and out of control and not so quiet and locked up. Now come on Jeanette pick yourself up and take Simon's advice as well."
The stall opened and Jeanette said,
"No more tears, say hello to your new Jeanette."
"That's the spirit. Come on Jeanette everything will be fine we'll find you another boy…"
"No, I'm going to win Simon back." Jeanette said.
"Jeanette that's not what I meant by picking yourself up….JEANETTE!" Melody ran after Jeanette who was heading straight to Simon.
Everyone was happy to see Jeanette and Melody back.
"Look, Theo won me a fishy." Eleanor said.
"Alvin won a stuffed poodle at the balloon dart game."
"Melody, are you alright?" Theodore asked in concern. Melody was panting because she was trying to catch up with Jeanette.
"Oh I'm just….peachy." Melody lied.
"Oh Simon." Jeanette asked sweetly.
"Yes Jeanette."
"Could we please ride the Tunnel of Love together?"
"Oh sure."
"Can I join you?" Dani asked.
"Yeah." Simon replied.
Simon, Dani, and Jeanette both got on the ride while the others watched. Alvin was laughing with Brittany. Eleanor and Theodore knew what was going to happen by the looks of it. Trever just stood there like he already knew what was going to happen when they exit which is truly possible because he is a ¾ vampire. When they all saw the boat come out they all saw Simon's clothes ripped to pieces with two shades of lipstick all over him including the lips and Dani and Jeanette were gripping onto the bars of the boat giving each other the stink eye.
"Damn, I didn't know Alvin and Simon swamped bodies." Melody randomly said. Everyone stared at her. When they all got off the ride, Jeanette grabbed her sister's arms and they began to walk home. Dani frowned and said,
"Trever, I think everyone's leaving."
"Yeah, bye Melody I'll call you." Trever and Dani walked in the opposite direction. Alvin, Theodore, and Melody just looked at Simon all covered in lipstick. Simon spoke,
"Look's like I'm caught in the middle of a girl's battle field."
"Yes you are." Melody, Theodore, and Alvin said.
"Yet, this is only the beginning of the battle." Alvin said as Melody, Simon, Theodore, and him began to walk home.
OMG what happened it the tunnel of love to cause Jeanette and Dani to become offical enemies? Find out in the next chapter, Please don't say that Dani is stealing Simon away from Jeanette or she's a b**** because then you got the story all wrong. Dani was being polite and letting Simon give her the prize and go on the rides and yes, she does like him but since Jeanette never said anything before her meltdown Dani pretty much thought Jeanette didn't mind. So please dont write that in your reveiw. Dani is not my character it's Dark Angel Danielle Seville's character as I said this is our first chapter of out Co-written story. Chapter two will becoming soon I promise.