A/N Hey this is my first posted fanfiction, it was supposed to be a long one shot, but I think ill make it a bit longer paced. end i own no one,(except one one's in future chapters, i don't own MLP, Hasbro does.) A/N
I had many distinguishing features, I was small, I had electric blue eyes instead of the normal acid green, and I could talk. Not a very big feature, I know, but let's say I'm a changeling, little things like that are suddenly a very big deal. Another not-quite-so-small thing is that I have the powers of an alicorn, even though I'm male. That's not even the good part. The good part is that my strength, speed, magic, and intelligence are multiplied tenfold with music. Naturally I'm carrying an iPod with me at all times, but the one time I'm not listening to it, I get surrounded by queen chrysalis's guards. I, very stupidly, yelled at the top of my lungs to get the f*** out of my way. Hey, I'm not too good with my low smarts. But anyway, I got hauled to her throne, apparently she didn't like how I could override her will with my own, something she does in war and for problematic changelings, or that I could eventually override others will with enough practice, or that I didn't need her to get something to eat, I had been 'born' differently. And being the only one experimented on doesn't really help with the talking to other people without utterly destroying them when I didn't get want I wanted. This is saved for information, deadly hunger or thirst, and the occasional pop tart box. But to get back on topic, she wanted to have me locked up to where I would HAVE TO depend on her for my next meal. I chose the option of escape, because no one wants to have to deal with an angry Chrysalis, and I would have an angry one to start with. While running from the guards, I transformed my eyes to the acid green of the normal changelings, and ran to the feeding grounds. Hoping to lose my tails in the confusion of the crowd, a ran to the far wall, ducked down, and traveled along the wall for a while, then stood up and calmly walked over to the closest feeding station. As the love became physical, I drank it up, feeling the guilt of stealing the love of another pony. Tasting the taint of taking something pure. Wanting someone to love me, not for food, but for the joy of sharing love with another. When I was sure they lost me, I got out of the feeding booth, and walked away from the feeding station and feeding grounds. Out, I hurried to my chamber, hoping they hadn't ransacked it already. So of course the room is trashed, the one thing that seemed to be in place was the picture I 'bolted' to the wall. It was a panel and a safe. the picture was the first time I meet Chrysalis. She had a guard take the picture of her and me together, smiling. Underneath it said "to my special changeling". On the back I wrote "be wary of who you trust, you may end up in pain". I took it down, got all the bits I had saved up, and a picture I had drawn of a pony the wasn't real, yet. I pushed the panel, and at the last second, took the picture, stuffed it in the little pocket of my pack, and pushed the panel again. As it shut, I slipped through, and turned on the light. Inside, I had an assortment of different items. Cloaks, food, a generator, chargers for iPods, blankets, multiple iPods, bottles, tents, sleeping bags, and a cart. I loaded all my things up, and headed towards a far off light.
A/N so yea, be constructively harsh, not point out every single mistake, i left some in because I believe it helps the story and my computer is special with words. end A/N