I have a new story idea,please comment what you think about it?

Title:Mission:Break Down Their Walls

Summary:Kim Crawford: The most popular girl in school has most,if not all boys falling for her except one

Jack Brewer:The new kid

Kim takes a liking into Jack and asks him out.

He says no

That's the first time someone has ever said no to Kim

She starts a mission

What's her mission?

Break down his walls

Will it be easy?

No,definitely not

Will it work?

Maybe...


Ages:

Jack-16

Kim-16

Jerry-16(almost 17)

Milton-17

Rudy-35


Disclaimer for whole story (in case I forget to do it):I do not own Kickin'it