Hey its babysister 1997 this is my first fanfiction for divergent! I wanted to do something different and classic with my story, I really hope you all like it!
Tris Pov-
My name is Beatrice however I prefer Tris. I'm the artistic one in the family. I love music, the theater, preforming, dancing, plus I know self-defense. I'm only five foot and a half, I have honey blond hair, blue-grey eyes, and I am very skinny. My family sees me as the rebellious sixteen year old who can't do anything the right way. I'm either not selfless enough or not able to follow the rules.
My parents Andrew and Natalie Prior are both very famous in the country. My dad he is the right hand man for Governor Marcus Eaton and my mom is a famous humanitarian. Then there's my brother who is in the same year as me (10th) only he is supper smart. My whole family not including me is selfless. As much as I try I can't seem to be selfless enough to please my parents
"Beatrice it's time to go", my brother Caleb yells, "It's the day when we go to our new school, and choose what fraction in the school we want to be. We don't want to be late".
Ugh. Morning again. I guess it's time to get up.
"Caleb I told you a million times I want to be called Tris! T-R-I-S Tris!" I yell back.
"Whatever you say Beatrice" Caleb says
I put on my cloths that I laid out for me to wear yesterday and put them on. I brush my teeth and my hair. I look in the mirror so I can see what I look like. My blond hair is strait so it reaches just past my elbows; I am in a grey ruffled tank top, grey skinny jeans, and grey boots. I have to say that I don't look too bad.
I take a look at my room one last time, and I grab my bags to head out. When I finally reach were my parents and brother is it looks like there all ready to go.
"Beatrice do you have everything you need for boarding school?" my mom asks.
"Yes mother I do" I say back.
"Ok than you may go", dad replies." I'll miss you"
Both Caleb and I start to pack our cars with all of our bags that we have packed.
"I'm going to miss you both so much" mom says with tears running down her face.
"I'm going to miss you to mom and dad" Caleb says while going to her and gives her a hug.
"Mom and dad I will miss you" I say while going up hugging them both.
"It's time to go" Caleb says quietly.
Both Caleb and I hop into our cars and drive away from our homes. However we are driving into our future.
Hey its babysister1997 again, if you want me to update i need to have 5 reviews! This chapter is really short because I wanted to see if people have intrest in the story. I have 6 chapters done already for this story, however i wont post them unless i get intrest. That is why I wont update unless I get reviews. For chapter 2 of the story i need to have 5 reviews. The more you review the faster i update.
Thanks again,
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