Hey everyone it has been a VERY long time since i have written anything, but I got hit with this idea yesterday and decided to pilot it PLEASE let me know what you think in the reviews so i can know whether to continue this story or not. PS, I need a Beta reader PM if your interested, Thanks!
Chapter 1
The Dream
Jake's eyes slowly fluttered open. "Wha-what" He stuttered, quickly taking in his immediate surroundings. he appeared to be standing on a flat blue landscape that went on out of sight, and a strange mist swirled mysteriously around his feet. Looking into the sky he saw nothing but a gaping black void. all light seemed to be coming from beneath the thick fog.
While Jake was trying to comprehend his surroundings a very loud, shrill female voice pierced the total silence. "You!" the voice boomed. Startled Jake took a large step back but the voice seemed to come from all directions. "Yes?" Jake answered shakily, "Who are you?" Rather than answering the voice just chuckled, then replied "You foolish boy I am not a 'who', but an It". " Oh! well in that case it clears it all up!" Jake snapped back.
"oh, calm yourself child and let me say what I have brought you here to say!" "Fine, can I at least know what to call you?" Jake answered, now curious. "hmmm, well I have never needed a name, but I suppose you could call me 'the Force' or just 'force' when you are talking to me. I am the a power that flows through every object, thing, and person in the galaxy." "ok well that's great to know ,but why should I believe you and why does this matter to me?" Jake replied in a disinterested sort of way.
"This will matter to you, because I plan to make you the first person able to use me to bend anything and everything to your will simply by wishing it. And I will prove this to you by teaching you how to use one of my basic powers tonight, while you sleep." "Pshhh, as if, when I wake up I will just realize that this is a dream and I will for get it ever even happened." Jake answered defiantly.
Suddenly a large block appeared about 7 feet from Jake. " Push It" she commanded. So jake walked over and attempted to shove the block, but it didn't budge. "Oh that won't work it weighs 10 tons, it's very dense material". "well then how the crap do I move it then?" Jake retorted, becoming frustrated with the vague advice. "well with your mind of course!" the voice answered boldly. "hah as if that were even possible, but since it's clear I can't leave until I satisfy you I'll try".
Jake then focused intensely on shoving the block as hard as possible. For a moment nothing happened, but ten he felt the air around him become thick and charged with a strange energy. He stayed focused on the block, and then suddenly all the charged air around him surged forward at high speed. When It made contact with the heavy cube, it was sent sailing far, far out of sight.
Alright guys and gals thats it for this pilot chapter PLEASE review and let me know if this is something you are interested In. Thanks!