As long as i can remember i have known the Pensives. I have lived across the road from them for years and have been friends with Susan for the entire time as we are best friends. She has been there for all the terrible times in my life especially when i was in a car accident when i was three, my vocal cords were damaged and have been unable to speak ever since. It has now been 13 years and Susan and i are still the best of friends even with me being mute, she makes sure i always have a notebook and pen with me so i can communicate with her and everyone else.
This story starts with me Jasmine (Jinxy) Riddle, how my life went from just knowing the Pensives and being in the dark about their adventures in Narnia, then being thrown into Narnia and finally realising there is someone out there that likes me; maybe even love me, and they don't care that i can't talk. This is the story of my adventure in Narnia and how i have found love with the last person that was expected and being able to forget about the person that hurt me so.

Description.

Name- Jasmine (Jinxy) Riddle

Eyes- A bright emerald green

Hair- Past the shoulders black long hair.

Height- 5'5

Age- 16

Can someone tell me if they like this or if i should add more as this is my first story well fanfic.