The Saiyan Rivalry
Chapter: 1 The Beginning
Disclaimer: I do not own DBZ or its characters. That is proudly owned by Akira Toriyama. I do however own the Plot and OC's in any of my stories, that includes Nick O'neal, and Julia O'neal. You may not use my OC's without express written Permission.
(A/N) Hello all and Thank you for taking your time out of your busy day to check out my first story. I know there will be many things I missed. I'll be editing each chapter constantly during the story. I will be going through each chapter whenever I get a chance, to fix any mistakes I missed when I posted the chapter. Anyway, hope you like the first Chapter. (I know, I need to work on my writing quite a bit.)
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*Bond / Telepathy Speaking*
/ change of POV or something happening elsewhere. /
3 years before Goku was born, two people were in command of the Omni Military. They led the forces through several wars throughout several Universes. Their names were Julia O'neal and Nick O'neal.
"Nick O'neal reporting for duty, Sir!" Nick said with pride. Zeno look's around and doesn't see Julia anywhere. "I see that, where's your wife at? I don't see her anywhere." Zeno said with a quizzical tone. Nick also looks around for Julia. "Hmm? I thought she was here already." Nick said with a bit of a sad tone. "Oh well, get your fleet prepared to be given to your brother for control in Universe 10." said Zeno with authority. "Will, do sir!" Nick said like a true solider. Nick starts to get the Seventh Fleet ready to move.
/Mean while in Universe 2 at the Omni-base/
Julia is currently going through the needed paper work to call it a day, when she notices that Nick is nowhere to be found. "Ok where did he go now, I needed him to get his paperwork finished before he left." Julia said with a sigh. She begins to speak to him using their bond. *Where are you at honey? You were supposed to do your paperwork before you left to go see Zeno. * *Damn, I knew I forgot something. I'll start on the paper work the moment the fleet is ready. What base you at? * *I'm at the Universe 2 base. Hurry up, and get here so we can go home for the crowning ceremony. * *Will do, be there soon honey. * Nick finally showed up and gives the needed papers to Julia, before they left back home.
It took them two hours to return to Universe 7. After checking out from the Universe 7 base they start heading back to their planet, Planet Vegeta. When they arrive, they were showered with gifts from everyone in the palace. They finally arrived at the castle, and decide to speak to Julia's cousin, King Vegeta. "Hey Veggie how's the Planet so far?" Said Nick. "Ugh, boring, nothing fun happened in months." Said K. Vegeta. "Well if you want, we can spar again." Nick says with a bit of enthusiasm. "No thanks', I rather not be in the infirmary again for a week, like last time." K. Vegeta said with a bit of a wince. "It wasn't that bad, was it?" Nick asked with a worried tone. "Yes, it was, Vidalia wasn't very happy after that you know." K. Vegeta said with a scowl. "That was your fault for telling me to go all out. I could've went less on you, and you wouldn't have gotten hurt." Nick said in a teasing tone. "Now, now, boys let's not argue. It's time for our crowning of our side of the kingdom, isn't it Nick?" Julia said with a bit of anxiety. Nick checks the time on his watch. "Yes, it is time, it's was supposed to start in ten minutes. Let's get going, so we don't miss it." Julia and Nick run off towards the Dressing room to get ready.
There's cheering throughout the kingdom. As Julia and Nick O'neal were crowned Queen and King of south Vegeta. "We will do our best at ruling, like our forefathers would have wanted us to be ruled." Nick said with a powerful voice. Nick and Julia have left the palace after the ceremony. when they returned to the universe 1 base it was early, so they decide to leave then. "Okay, everyone let's jump to universe 10 now, so we can give the command over to my brother. Today is the last day my wife and I will be in the Omni military, so let's have a bit of fun on our way to the universe 10 base." Nick said with a proud smile. They had a large party to celebrate the retirement of Nick and Julia. The party lasted for hours as they went at slower cruising speed, then usual. It took them ten hours to get to the Universe 10 base.
When they arrive William O'neal was waiting with a smile on his face. "Well brother, looks like you're finally retiring, from the squad. Hope you guys had a great ceremony for the crowning, would have been there if it wasn't for all the issues in this universe." Said William "Yes, we had a great time. Also, we know you would have shown up if it wasn't for the trouble here." Nick said with a knowing smile. "I agree, you would've loved it there. I even heard a few people are interested in you, William." Said Julia in a teasing tone. "Oh is that a fact? I may have to return for shore leave then." William said jokingly. "Well, time to give up the fleet to you brother. Take good care of them, they are like family." Nick said in a sad tone. "Will do, little brother." William said with a small smile. Nick gives his brother command of the Seventh Fleet before turning to his old ship crew, to say something before leaving. "Well, guys this seems to be the end of me giving commands, but always know that this was the best several eons that I have had yet. I know my brother will lead you to even greater things then I would have. So, I leave you all in very capable hands now. My wife and I will always be glad to have met each one of you. Have an awesome life." Nick said as he leaves with Julia by his side.
They travel back to the base Universe 7 in under five hours. Once they got back in their universe, they start heading back to their planet. They arrived on Planet Vegeta about twenty-five minutes after arriving in the universe. When they arrive on Planet Vegeta. They noticed Frieza's taking several saiyans to work for him. "Did I just see Prince Vegeta get taken by Frieza?" Nick said with a scowl. "I believe so honey. Let's go speak with Vegeta about this treachery. This should've never happened." Julia said with a similar scowl on her face. They run towards the eastern capital of Planet Vegeta. There they see their family and friends injured and maimed. After running to the palace, we see King Vegeta crying because they took his son, and his people. "Veggie, you alright? What happened here, and where is half of your guard at!?" Nick said in a panicked Tone. "I'm okay, Nick, though Frieza took my son, and half of my elite guard. I tried to protect them, but he was just too powerful." K. Vegeta said in a sad tone while he was being moved to the infirmary. "I should have been here. This would've never happened if I was around here all the time. I will kill Frieza myself for this treachery." Nick said as he was shaking in pure anger. "He will regret the day he crossed a super Saiyan!"
/Meanwhile in Universe 1 at the home of Zeno/
"Hmm, seems like Frieza has finally taken a few of Vegeta's guards and son. It, also seems to have set Nick off as well. Nick needs to calm down and regain control over the transformation. Well guess it's time to bring Nick up to speed with Bardock's vision." Zeno begins using Telepathy to contact William. *You there William? I need to speak with you immediately* *Im here sir. What do you want to speak to me about?" William thought to Zeno. *Seems like your brother just snapped and transformed to Super Saiyan, because Frieza just attacked and taken half of the west Kingdoms guards, and King Vegeta's son. Nick is about to go and kill Frieza now. This must not happen. His death is much later in life. Leave and calm him down immediately. * *Will do it now sir! * William thought. William tells the fleet to jump to Universe 7 and to go max speed. "you have better not killed yourself brother, otherwise I'm going to kick your ass from here to Universe 35." William thinks to himself.
About an hour has past since the fleet had finished jumping to Universe 7. William has been telling Nick, about the vision Bardock had. "So that's the reason you can't kill him, brother. However. I believe that Zeno wants to speak to you about something." William said with a bit of wisdom. "Very well, I'll talk to him soon." Nick said with a bit of wonder in his voice.
(A/N) Well I had to leave it on a cliff hanger… also this is a perfect spot to stop right now. There will be more chapters coming every week on Sunday. That will be my day I post the chapters for this story. R&R please it will go a long way to improving my writing. Have a good day!