AUTHORS NOTE: Anything in bold parentheses () are my own personal observations as these are being transcribed from paper to text. I would also like to say, critiquing this story will not help in any way. I've progressed since then, but I feel like having this around will be something nice I can look back on for when I'm struggling and realize that what I am writing has evolved from... this. So without further adeu... enjoy this knockoff Eragon fanfiction, fanfiction. xDDD Also I am fixing spelling and punctuation issues as I go... I can't not. lol
As I ran through the walls of Galadriel... (I always wondered where I got that name from and I'm pretty sure it's from Lord of the Rings xD)
WAIT!
Let me start five months from now.
My name is Tahlin Forelorn and I'm fourteen years old. (WHAT IS THAT LAST NAME?! LMAO)
Here is my story.
Five months ago a man came into my house and asked my mom where I was. My mom told me not to come downstairs….
But I did.
BIG MISTAKE! (I use this line again in the next chapter I think lmao)
As I walked into the kitchen, the man. had a knife to my mother's throat.
"Come with me if you want your mother to live." He said flatly. (Yes, terminator voice xD)
So I went with him, and he killed her.
It was a year in the making when I overheard Brenton talking to someone. I stuck my ear to the door and listened.
"When do I get her?" A strange voice said.
"When I get my 1,000 lire." Brenton said.
I heard the clan of coins hit the ground.
"Well, Lord Vahn, you sure do have a way of negotiating." Brenton said.
"Tonight, after dinner… what's that?" Lord Vahn asked.
Suddenly, I realized that I was breathing heavy. I shut my mouth, ran up to my room, and locked myself in there. (YOU'VE BEEN LIVING THERE FOR A YEAR AND YOU HAVENT RUN AWAY YET?! AND YOU HAVE FREE ROAM OF THE HOUSE?! WHAT)
That night after dinner.
Brenton said, "I want you to meet me in the ballroom at exactly six pm and no later than that. Okay?"
"Okay, I'll be there." I said flatly.
"Not a second later, not a minute sooner. Six pm sharp!" Brenton snapped. (lmao I cant)
Later that night, I packed up all of my stuff and crept out of my room. I ran down the halls as quick as a mouse. I looked at my watch. It was five fifty nine pm.
"Crud." I thought. (Because I was 14 and 'Shit' was not part of my vocab back then lol)
As I rounded the corner I ran into someone. I started to scream but they put their hand over my mouth.
"Come with me" He said.
I hesitated then I followed him.
He led me into a dark room as kissed me.
NOT! The cringe is so real
Instead he grabbed me by my shoulders and said, "Now!"
"What?" I stammered.
"Well, well, well… we meet at last." A strange man said.
As he spoke I remembered him from last night. (don't you mean earlier that morning? lmao)
"Lord Vahn!" I yelled.
"Yes?" He hissed. (Like a snake yissssssssssssssssssSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSsssssssssssssssssss?)
All of a sudden he pulled out a green orb. I cried out in pain as the orb started to glow.
"Apart!" I yelled in exhaustion.
Lord Vahn flew back ten feet, as he dropped the orb at my feet.
The brighter the orb glowed, the weaker I got.
Then the boy came over to me and put the orb in his shirt and tossed it at the wall, as it smashed to pieces. (shirtless men wooo)
"Be Healed!" He said.
When I got to my feel I yelled, "Apart! Descenso!"
He flew back ten feet and fell to the floor and yelled in pain.
"Please stop, I won't hurt you." He stammered.
"No. Why should I quit? You sold me out, you led me back to Lord Vahn. So why should I give you mercy?" I yelled.
"Because I can get you out alive." He managed to say.
"Be Healed." I said after a few minutes. (Yeah, because you've met him all of 3 minutes and he's already betrayed you lmao how'd he even get into the building?)
"Thanks." He said looking into my eyes.
When he did my heart felt as if it did a somersault. (here it comes oh god...)
It got quiet, too quiet. Then without warning, a huge red and black dragon came crashing through the stone walls with two boys on it. I fell to the floor when the dragon came to a massive stop.
"You okay?" He asked, helping me up.
"Yea, I'm fine." I said taking his hand.
"Strider! Are you coming or not?" One boy said, "Who's she?!"
"Yeah! That's Ben, and the quiet one is Ryan. And me, I'm Strider, and this is Jaws, my dragon." He said as we got up on Jaws. As we took off, I yelled with joy, as we whisked out of the window, as my adventures in the Fantasy Realm began. (I couldn't think of a name for the land! LMAO I WAS GOING TO USE ALAGAESIA BUT ERAGON MAN LOL)