Hi people… I'm new at this whole fanfiction posting thing

Well, I've been reading a lot of fanfics, but I havent written one yet…

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Bellas POV

I stared at the blood now surrounding me. James and Victoria have been abusing me for a 16 years now. This time, they punched my face, and started kicking me. I started crying while they were beating on me. This only made them get madder.

"Shut up you lazy bag of bones!" Shouted Victoria, who now grabbed me by my hair. I let out a yelp of pain.

"She can't hear you my love. She's crying." Said James as I watched a smile slowly spreading across his face.

James leant towards me, and whispered in my ear, "Come over to my bedroom tonight. You can start cleaning it early."

I thought of horrible thoughts of James and me alone. I thought about all the brutal treatments he will do to me. I grew numb.

"Okay?" Whispered James once more, his cool breath tickling my neck.

I wanted so badly to slap him. To take revenge on him.

Victoria grabbed James by the collar of his shirt, and started kissing him fiercely. "Oh no you don't, your sleeping with me tonight."

I was free from James tonight. What a relief. I headed towards my small bedroom. I was the servant of this household. Not even a house. It was more like a castle. I passed the kitchen, and towards the bathroom. I stared at myself in the mirror. I looked horrible. I had bruises on my face, my left eye was swollen, and dried blood stains were everywhere. I ran upstairs to my only friends room. "Angela! Angela!" I shouted. When I entered her room, she looked up.

"Ohmygod, what happened?" She asked, but I already could tell that she knew the answer. Without letting my answer, she slipped off of her bed, and ran to the bathroom. She came out with a wet towel and some medicine.

"Victoria and James beat me up again" I mumbled, not looking up.

"I shoulda guessed." Growled Angela, dabbing the wet towel onto my eye. I winced in pain.

"Oh, sorry."

"Its alright. They do this to me everyday, remember? Why is it me that they like to torture?" I asked hopelessly.

"Well, I outta call the police and arrest them." Said Angela.

"What good will that do?" I asked. "It's not like they're gonna arrest them. Remember, they're vampires."

"Oh, right. I can't belive they to"

"HEY! ANGELA! COME OVER HERE!"

"Crap, there goes Jessica." Whined Angela. Jessica was a servant too, but somehow Victoria liked her because of her attitude.

Angela walked over to the door, and turned the door handle carefully. "So long Bella, I'm going off to prison."

For the first time, I laughed. That was not even close to what prison was like. My stomach grumbled as Angela walked out the door. I knew what was for dinner today. Bread and corn.

I started walking towards my bedroom, when James suddenly popped out of nowhere. I gasped.

"Here human human human" Joked James. I glared at him. "Heres a list of stuff to buy in the city. I'm going to attach a detector to your hair. Your not going to run off, will you now?" Chuckled James as he put his heavy arms around me, and clipped a small detector to my hair. He then rested his nose on my forehead, inhaling a deep scent of my almost gone blood stains. "Go fetch my little human."

I walked down to the city, which was not far away, and into the music store to buy the music Victoria had wanted. I walked in, and started for the back shelves. That's when I ran into a guy.

"Ouch!" I yelped as I ran into his hard skin. Who was this? He had really hard, cold skin, like James and Victoria. I looked up, and I saw the most beautiful guy in my life.

Was that good? I hope so. Please review! The only thing that is going to keep me writing is your reviews. (Next chapter is when Edward come into Bellas life)