This is my first Bleach story Surprising since I watched the anime and I'm reading the manga have you seen rukia's Bankai that shit look gooder than a bitch anyway to the story
Thoughts: Thoughts
Story parts that tell the setting
character talking: " whatever you say Ichigo Kurosaki "
Ichigo Kurosaki the 16 year old substitute soul reaper was walking home from a long day at school
" Damn those Bounts Kariya really put me through it " Ichigo suddenly stops when he feels a strong spiritual pressure " who the hell is that "
A girl standing on a electrical pole starts laughing " Surprise Surprise he sensed us shira I guess he was right he might prove to be a challenge " Shira starts laughing " I guess you're right Aisu should we fight him now? " Not right now I don't want to disturb the souls of this world with our battle "
Aisu uses flashstep and appears in front of Ichigo
"I take it you've already sensed me Ichigo Kurosaki "
" Yea I sensed you just now so what do you want ? "
A girl completely white like ice walks from behind Aisu " we want to fight you " " Shira what did I say about being a little more discreet Ichigo Kurosaki its true I want to fight you but not here I wont be responsible for disrupting the souls of this world Ichigo Kurosaki I will give you three days meet me in the soul society well fight there where we can use our full strength "
Ichigo looks up at her " fine ill fight you but I do have one question for you " Aisu tilts her head " what is it " " who is that girl right there " Ichigo points at shira " oh you mean shira how could I put this she's my inner hollow like you I had to regain my soul reaper powers but I was to late the mask had already formed and I found myself with her over time her a I learned to work together but that's enough about me three days Ichigo kurosaki three days " Aisu and shira disappear
" that girl could be dangerous Ill go see Mr. Hat and Clogs tomorrow " Ichigo starts walking home
Chapter 1
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