The Pain Without the Pleasure (subject to change)

By : Taurus-Sparrow-0506

deux septembre, deux mille quartre (I need to practice my French cause that's one of my creative arts classes.)

Sptember 2, 2004

A/N: Bonjour! Taurus-Sparrow-0506 here with a brand new fic. I had this idea to start in the middle and then make my way across both sides of the park (well mostly because I can't figure out a way to begin it)

Jack took all his frustration on the bars of his cell shaking them fiercely as if they would somehow lose their structure. Menlaus would pay for what he did and what he was about to do. Jack, of course, had no idea what Menlaus was doing to his Maria right now but whatever he was doing there would be hell to pay.

"Dammit!" He yelled banging his hands a final time against the bars. All of the crew or what was left of it only looked at his with a sort of an understanding and sympathy.

Will stood beside that spot that Captain Sparrow had suddenly taken a seat at near a corner. His hands clung to the bars, leaning his weight into it as if he too was waiting for a miracle to happen, shifting his feet from time to time. The blacksmith turned pirate stared off into the cell in which his wife sat. Across from his cell sat Elizabeth, huddled in a corner. She sat an angle letting them see her closed eyes but the lips that moved as if she prayed. She wore a plain tan dress that had probably at once been white.

"Anamaria," she murmured in her sleep. Her head lolled to the other side as her eyes clenched tightly together. It was a dream though it was if she was seeing what was happening right at this very moment. "Ana…maria." And then suddenly she jolted awake grabbing for anything that was steady and strong which so happened to be a bar of her 'cage'.

"They're raping her!" Will looked at her with a shocked and confused expression. How did she know?

"Shut up 'Lizabeth!" And it that moment Jack gained a supernatural speed suddenly taking Will's position, pushing him away to directly in front of the governor's daughter. Jack didn't want to hear that word. He had to at least try to think positive, hoping that these things wouldn't happen to his beloved. Hoping and thinking was useless though, Elizabeth was probably right. What else would they be doing to a fresh, young girl like Ana? But if he couldn't hear it than it didn't exist right?

Her mouth turned into an almost sensuous o position but this was not the time for things like that. "I'm terribly sorry Jack I didn't mean to--"

"I said shut the bloody 'ell up!" he yelled.

"Don't blame Elizabeth for this Jack!" He shouldn't and though Will didn't say it, all of this was his fault.

"Screw you Will," he said at the moment grabbing a fistful of hair with one hand and using the other to slam into the wall where he would take his rage upon. There was no more talking after that, Jack, Will, Elizabeth and the crew lost in their own thoughts…

I'd expect that we'd be captured for something sooner or later but I'd never expect it to be like this.

I said I'd follow Jack to hell and back and I fear that this is it…

I knew we shouldn't have come back to the Black Pearl with Jack, he always gets himself into a mess and this time Elizabeth and I are caught in the middle of it.

I know what I saw! I know what they're doing to her! And we have to save her. But how and what's the cost?

This is all my damned fault. God knows what they're doing to her right now and there's no fucking way to save her…

A/N: Those are the thoughts of 5 of our characters at the end (obviously). The last 4 are kind of… obvious. Well maybe just the last three but whatever. In your reviews please send me some ideas for why Menlaus would be after Jack. I need good ones and not "You killed my wife/parents/village/children."

I hope you liked it but if not fuck you cause I don't really care as I've said before on numerous occasions.