Ok i know this is bad but i put notes in ()s all through story.
Also if u the reader like the charaters feel free 2 use them in your own stuff.
Chapter 1
It all starts on a navy ship at sea (much like the Mediterranean) set between 2 very different countries. The Casmean ship is patrolling 4 an infamous pirate who's been attacking any ship that crosses his path. On this day, the navy is lucky. (Ha) The pirate ship is spotted. A fierce battle ensues. (Double ha!! Always liked that line.) The criminal is captured & brought on board. The captain has him put his cabin & his men imprisoned. (Prepare 4 "cheesy dialogue")
"So U R the 1 whose been causing so much trouble."
(Speaks the 6'4" tanned captain w/the shoulder length blue-black hair.)
"So what if I am"
"Ha, what a waste of time it's been hunting U."
The cocky "Casmean" youth smiles.
"So many ships sent to find me. Should I be flattered? Or is your fleet that incompetent?"
"Brave words from a doomed man. Still there R alternatives!!"
"What do U mean?"
"Simply a proposition….I rarely get a good fight on this ship anymore."
"So we fight & you'll let me go?"
"If U win, I'll consider it….However if I win well…"
He snickers & flashes the boy a lustful leer.
(ha,"bad" idea)
The youth gapes in shock.
"Ha, I guess you'll take your chance at court…Maybe you're not as good a fighter as your rep. implies."
"Fine, I'll beat U easily…Choice of weapons?"
"Swords"
At that the pirate laughs.
"What?"
"Nothing, nothing…come on lets get this over w/."
They fight all around the room. Both w/great skill. Neither one winning, & yet not giving an inch either.
