Well I managed to get three reviews like i wanted ( though one was criticizing the soon-to-be-story).
Silent Memento or whatever your name is- have you realized this story hasn't started yet and thats why it's only 96 words or are you just that damn dumb.
Lunar Eclipse- I appreciate you reviewing even though this isn't your favorite pairings story so for you i think ill put in some ikarishipping
Mitja K- I like Pearlshipping to, the most out of all pairings actually, but we'll have to wait till the future to find out the final pairings
By the way for this to work i have to up the ages a little
Ages:
Ash- 16
Dawn-14
May- 15
Drew- 16
Brock- 19
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Love Square
"Well I guess thats it" said a young man with a fainted Turtwig cradled in his hands and a pikachu on his back
"It's alright Ash you can't win them all, the Pokemon league is home to the best of the best" said a blunette girl with a piplup standing beside her
" I know Dawn but I really thought I'd finally become a Pokemon Champion"
" Ya I know what you mean, I felt the same way when I became runner up at the Grand festival, except of course I thought I'd become Contest Master"
" How about we go to the nearest Pokemon center and rest up, it is our last day together you know" said a third person who was much older than the others and had dark skin.
" Ok Brock " the other two said in unison
The trio walked to the closest pokemon center they could find and quickly went to sleep. It wasn't until morning that any of them woke up. After saying his goodbyes Brock left to catch his ferry while Ash and Dawn stayed at the pokemon center.
" So Ash where are you gonna be going" Dawn asked
" Well I was thinking I would go to the Hoenn region to see my friends and take a break for a while"
" Do you think i could come with you" Dawn asked knowing that if Brock was here he would laugh his ass off. After all it didn't take a genius to figure out that Dawn had a crush on Ash.
" I guess you could but why do you want to come"
" What I can't spend more time with my friend" Dawn said pretending to be mad so Ash would just dismiss the question. It worked too.
" Um nevermind, just follow me to the ferry"
Dawn squealed with happiness as she followed Ash to the ferry station.
All passengers going to Slateport city please board the S.S. Craig now
" Thats us Dawn, we better hurry"
Ash and Dawn ran as fast as they could and just by minutes made it in the S.S. Craig. As soon as they got their Ash took out his newly bought pokephone to tell May that he and Dawn would be coming to Slateport soon.
" Ok, so your going to be at the Slateport ferry station waiting for us (pause) alright thanks May" Ash said hanging up
" So May is gonna be their" Dawn asked
"Yup"
" You know I just realized how long it's been since I've seen her"
"Ya me too"
" Well my room is here so I'll see you tommorow Ash"
"Ok see ya"
After Ash found his room he opened the room and immediately threw himself on the bed
"Wow I can't believe we're gonna get to see May again huh Pikachu"
" Pika Pi " The little yellow mouse said
" Tommorow will be great, 'night pikachu"
"Pika"
After a long, nice sleep Ash woke up to the sound of a knocking on his door. As he went to change his clothes he heard Dawn's voice from the other side the door "Ash wake up we're already at Slateport!" After hearing this he immediately ran to the door and opened it, apparently forgetting he was in his tank top and boxers.
Dawn's face color turned to a deep shade of red and she almost lost consciousness. Luckily Ash didn't notice since he was so freaked out that he was in his boxers. After changing into his regular clothes Ash and Dawn went to the exit of the boat.
"Hey Dawn sorry about what happened back there I was just really excited"
" Its alright Ash lets just try not to bring it up" Dawn said as she was slowly getting her blush back
" Thats defiantly fine with me" Ash said giving Dawn a wide smile
As they neared the exit Dawn and Ash could already see May waiting for them. Ash started sprinting toward the exit all the while crashing into people and gaining quite a few curses. Pikachu was hanging on Ash for his life. Dawn would pass by all the passengers and politely apologize for her friend.
When Ash finally came out of the ferry he quickly spotted May. He smiled very widely and started waving so May could see him. Then something caught his attention. May was clinging onto someone. Ash came closer to get a better view of who it was.
A frown then found it's way on Ash's lips. The person May was clinging onto it was none other than Mr. Hotshot himself, Drew. Ash started remembering the day Drew came to Sinnoh.
Flashback
Ash and the gang were in a pokemon center waiting for Drew. Ash hadn't seen Drew for a while so he was looking forward to the visit.
The door opened and a green-haired teen came through it. He was the probably the same age as Ash with a couple months difference
" Drew! Your finally here" Ash said
" Ya Ash and I've been itching for a pokemon battle ever since I came to Sinnoh"
" You got one! Oh, but first I'd like to introduce you to Dawn and you already know Brock"
" So your Drew huh, I've heard your a great co-ordinator" Dawn said
" Ya and I've heard your not a bad co-ordinator yourself"
Dawn took a questioning look at Ash and he nodded. Dawn then turned back to look at Drew and smiled " I guess so"
" Oh and Drew before we battle I'd like to know how is May"
" She's fine, In fact she asked me out the other day"
"What did you say?" Dawn asked while Ash clenched his fist
" To be honest I said I'll think about it, but now I think I might reject it"
" Why"
Drew then looked Dawn straight in the eye " 'cause theres another"
End Flashback
Ash was pissed off Drew said he like someone other than May but still took May any way. Dawn finally came out of the exit a to see Ash frozen. Dawn looked at the same direction Ash was looking at and saw that May was clinging onto Drew.
'' Didn't Drew say he liked another girl?'' Dawn thought
Then she thought of something. Why was Ash staring at them anyway. Did he care? To Dawn it all made sense now. Ash liked May!! But she wasn't about to let May take him from her that easily...
Tiring and Short. That bites. Ketchum kid and Jonz, you guys have to understand I didn't even know if I would make this story that is why I asked people to review first to see if they liked the idea. But thanks for trying to correct me. Btw Review what couple you want in the end or should i have a poll you tell me bye