Characters:
Queen Melanie The Beautiful
Princess Annie
Peter Pevensie
Susan Pevensie
Edmund Pevensie
Lucy Pevensie
I made up Queen Melanie The Beautiful and Princess Annie. The rest are from The Chronicles of Narnia series by C.S. Lewis. The four Pevensies, the witch, and Aslan look as they do in the Disney and Walden Media film version of Prince Caspian.
There will be sections of a small bits of romance between two of the characters in my story. ;)
Also, this is my first FanFiction story. I'll get another one started eventually. I wanted to rush and get my first story done.
One day Peter, Susan, Edmund, and Lucy Pevensie all had found a wonderful country named Narnia. They were deciding on what they should do. Peter wanted to go exploring, Susan wanted to go back to their home in England, and Lucy (She had already been in Narnia and had met some friends) wanted to visit Queen Melanie.
"Well, I don't know who this Queen Melanie is and we could easily get lost here and we didn't bring anything to eat," Susan pointed out.
"I know and met Queen Melanie. She's such an awesome Queen! I bet you all would like love Queen Melanie!" Lucy said.
"I'll vote for Lucy. After all, Lucy knows and had met Queen Melanie. Besides, Susan, Queen Melanie may have food to eat," Edmund said.
"Peter, you haven't spoken about what exactly you want," Susan said.
"I think that if we do go to Queen Melanie, that would be a bit of an adventure and exploring. And, Susan, Edmund does have a point. Queen Melanie could serve us food," Peter said.
"Alright then! Lucy, lead on," Edmund said. Soon, the Pevensies saw a huge palace.
"Hi guards! I, Lucy Pevensie, brought my siblings to see her Majesty, Queen Melanie," Lucy said.
"Ah Lucy! I remember you! Go on in! Queen Melanie will be happy to see you and meet your siblings," Guard Adam said, opening up the palace gates.
"Thank you!" Lucy said. Soon, the Pevensies were greeted by a girl with beautiful long silky golden brown hair.
"Hey Lucy!" the girl said.
"Hey Annie! Here's my siblings. Peter is the oldest at the age of nineteen, then Susan at age seventeen, then Edmund at the age of sixteen, then I'm the youngest," Lucy said. Annie and Edmund caught each other's stare. Edmund blushed and turned away.
"Hi! I'm Annie, the younger sister of Queen Melanie The Beautiful. I'm sixteen years old. My sister's twenty-two," Annie said.
"Hello my friends," a beautiful, wise, calm voice said. Everyone turned and saw a beautiful black haired teen girl.
"Melanie! Meet my siblings. Peter is nineteenth, Susan's seventeen, and Edmund's sixteen," Lucy said.
"Hi everyone! You can call me just Mel or Melanie. Don't worry about adding 'Your Majesty' and/or 'Queen'. Just Mel or Melanie," Melanie said.
"Hello!" Peter said.
The Pevensies now knew Queen Melanie quite well.
"Got any plans today?" Edmund asked Annie.
"No," Annie said.
"I like your hair, it looks AMAZING!" Edmund said.
"Thanks," Annie said.
"So, where are your parents?" Edmund asked. He saw Annie's face expression change from happiness to sadness.
"My parents have disappeared eight years ago. No one know where or what happened. My sister was crowned six years ago. I never really knew my parents," Annie said.
"I, I'm sorry," Edmund said, feeling Annie's sorrow and loss. Edmund then wrapped Annie in his arms. Annie didn't shove away. Edmund felt Annie's head resting on his chest. Edmund gently stroked Annie's golden brown hair. He felt Annie moving her head so that her head fit into Edmund's neck. They stayed like that for a while, talking and getting to know each other. Edmund felt sorry for Annie for not know her parents well. Annie smiled fondly up at Edmund. Annie's smile made Edmund feel all warm and fuzzy on his inside.
"I better go," Annie said, getting up to leave.
"Wait," Edmund said. Annie and Edmund then kissed. Annie smiled.
"I love you, Edmund. You're the only one who actually understands my thoughts and feelings," Annie said.
"I love you too," Edmund said. Annie smiled and then left.
8 MONTHS LATER...
Edmund and Annie grew even more attached to each other. But one night, Edmund vanished. Everyone searched hard for him but they couldn't find him.
