First chapter of fanfiction
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The sound of the leaves swaying in the wind was heard on a beautiful night where the round moon shone brightly in the night sky
Until soon something went flying between the leaves until it stopped in the middle of the forest near a hut that seemed abandoned.
The figure was no more than a boy between 12 to 13 years of blond hair who seemed to have bathed in the same sun, deep blue eyes as if they were jewels inside them hide a great flame of determination. His skin was like that of a peach with three whisker marks on each of his cheeks
His clothes were a black shirt with an orange jacket burned with claw shapes on the sides, on his back was the image of a devilish wind shuriken with nine points with the symbol of a red swirl in the center.
He wears more opaque orange pants with black lines on his sides and ninja bandages on the right side of his leg and a brown bag on his waist
This person was Naruto Uzumaki, a young with guts who dreams of being the best shinobi ninja in the world and the future hokage in Konohagakure ...
The reason he is in that abandoned cabin was to look for a parchment since one of his professors from the academy told him that if he got it he could graduate from the academy ...
A strange test if one asks, but for someone who has failed the shinobi tests twice ... Well, he needed to pass to fulfill his objectives ...
The test asked to enter and take the parchment and leave without being discovered ...
Although I expected something more challenging ... I say, Mizuki told him that the parchment would be very well protected and hidden but it took less than five minutes to find it ...
Seriously ... it's like they put a huge sign pointing where it hides ... best shinobi systems to protect valuable objects, my eggs ...
With a foxish smile Naruto looked at the parchment that was a little unwrapped rebelling several high-grade jutsus
"Let's see ... -" he said looking attentively at the words written on the parchment. - "Kage bunshin no jutsu (Jutsu shadow clones) ... Interesting" he muttered a bit to himself
Several minutes later Naruto was resting on a tree with the parchment next to him and unannounced a chunin with brown hair tied in a ponytail and a scar that ran from one side of his face to the other appeared in the place with an annoying look.
"The game's over, Naruto," said the boy's sensei looking at her sternly, with you Iruka Umino Naruto's sensei number 1
. "- Very good Iruka-sensei, he was quick, he only gave me time to learn a single jutsu ..." said the smiling Uzumaki looking at his teacher who looked at him a little surprised to see this boy, because he seemed to have been training harshly. - "Once I teach you this great jutsu you will have to approve me" - I finish saying with a laugh of satisfaction
"What are you talking about?" Iruka asked intrigued to know what he meant by what he had said.
"I know everything, Iruka-sensei, Mizuki-sensei told me ... Everyone who learns a parchment jutsu can approve, he was the one who told me where he could find it and he also told me about this place to train" Naruto said while remembering what his sensei and Iruka's companion had told him.
'Mizuki? - Iruka thought surprised when suddenly he felt like something was about to attack them, turning quickly as he watched as several kunais were quickly heading towards him'
The ninja reacted quickly pushing hard the boy who fell to the ground confused while a rain of kunais crossed several parts of the body of Iruka until crashing against the pair of wood of the cabin that was there.
"What ?! What's going on ?!" Naruto said confused without understanding why Mizuki had attacked them. -
"give me the scroll, Naruto," Mizuki ordered, which was on the branch of a large tree nearby.
"Naruto, do not let Mizuki take possession of that scroll, it has secrets that could be very dangerous for the village!" Iruka said as he removed the kunais from his body ...
Mizuki laughed at the words of his old friend, then turned his gaze to the blond-haired boy to talk again. -Don't make me laugh Iruka ... Even you hate Naruto, since what happened 12 years ago "- the perverse ninja started talking about a sensitive topic.
"What happened 12 years ago?" Naruto asked by the words of the whitish haired ninja.
"Everyone knows it except you, why do you think most people treat you like rubbish, as if they hated you for just seeing you?" said Mizuki trying to fill the blonde's anger
"Mizuki, stop! It's forbidden!" Iruka tried to silence his companion who was still talking.
"Right now everyone hates you, everyone despises you for what happened 12 years ago hahaha" said Mizuki, reprimanding herself
"Everybody knows…?" Naruto said he did not understand anything.
"12 years ago, the Kyubi no Kitsune attacked the village ... And that fox was locked in you! You are the beast!" Mizuki said as he laughed like he was crazy (although he's really a dick crazy ... * coo coo *)
However instead of being stunned, Naruto began to escape a slight laugh that then became stronger confusing the two chunin
"Oh seriously, it kills me with laughter this" Naruto said as he looked at Mizuki - "I'm sorry to inform you Mizuki-baka but I have news, I already knew for a long time that the kyubi lived inside me!"
"What?!" shouted Mizuki in shock, the same happened with Iruki
"Yep, I knew it when I was six years old and although it can be someone annoying, she can be very friendly when is known" Naruto said standing up
"She?" ask Mizuki
"Oh you did not know? The Kyubi is a girl" Naruto said surprising the two ninjas who did not know - "But it's good that he showed his true face Mizuki-baka, we really wondered when he was going to show it"
Before he could ask when he said "we" ... Naruto said something else
"True Aniki!" Naruto said looking at one of the trees near them
"Of course, Naruto-boy" said a figure as he walked calmly on one of the branches of the tree emerging from his hiding place ...
He was a young adult of one 21 years of dark blue hair with a white area. His skin was slightly pale, he wears round glasses but under them you could see orange eyes. Wear a simple navy blue shirt with a silver robe, black pants and wooden sandals
Despite having a nerdy style was someone handsome
"Hello Iruka-san, Naruto-boy has told me a lot about you, I really thank you for being the only one who has taught him something and not for those idiots who continue to confuse a bag with a kunai or how was that expression?" said the young man as he placed his finger on his lips confused a bit before shaking his head - "It does not matter, at least our plan will work!"
"Plan, what are you talking about and who the hell are you ?!" Shout Mizuki before the stranger
"Certainly I have not presented myself, a thousand apologies gentlemen" said the young man scratching his neck in embarrassment giving an innocent smile - "My name is Ryoma Tatsumaki and you could say that I am the older brother of Naruto-boy"
"Naruto's older brother?" Iruka asked since he did not know that Naruto had a brother, in fact he had never seen him in the village
"He is not exactly my older brother but I see him as one ... The reason they have not seen him in the village is because he is a person who does not go out much, he always stays locked in his room working on his projects ... in addition, Ryoma he is not a ninja, he has his damaged chakra nets since he was born but what he lacks of ninjutsu, he knows how to fight but above all he is a mad scientist "
"Correction, I'm an eccentric scientist" said Ryoma
"What kind of scientist laughs like a maniac at 4 in the morning?" Naruto asked
Before both brothers started arguing, Mizuki lost her temper - "Shut up both at once!" scream
"Oh right, I forgot about the fear ... a thousand sorry" Ryoma said as he adjusted his glasses - "" Well, I guess we already know the truth, you will try to kill us, right? " ask to the evil ninja
Mizuki just growled in anger
"I'll take that as a yes, well ... I'm sorry but we can not allow it" Ryoma said as the reflection of one of the lenses of his glasses showed his eyes frowning - "Naruto-boy!"
"Yosh, I was waiting years ago!" Naruto said excitedly as he looked at Iruka - "Iruka-sensei, what you see now is the reason that I have been holding back in the academy" he said as he leapt towards the branch of the tree next to his brother - "Could you finish it?" asked him
"Of course! If it were not for Kurami-chan's help, I could not have finished your gift" Ryoma said as he takes out a suitcase and opens it ...
Inside it was a black object with a lever and bright orange panel, next to it was a small orange object on the front with a black button, in the center there was a sticker showing a swirl with a ninja standing on the center with the words "maelstrom ninja", at the top was a transparent area
"Here you have Naruto-boy a customized version of my first invention the game driver and version 2 of the gashat hurricane ninja or rather maelstrom ninja now" said Ryoma with a smile
Naruto smiled taking the large object and placed it on his waist like a yellow ribbon tied around him like a green slot on the left side that had two orange holders next to it
Then he took the gashat in his hands and before pressing the switch he stopped and looked at his brother - "Aniki, why do not you join the party and let us show you what we are capable of"
Ryoma smiled supporting the idea as he also pulls the same buckle from Naruto but this was neon green with the lever and magenta panel. Then he took out of his pocket a navy blue gashat with the image of a high ranking ninja with several of his soldiers behind him and the title "Hurricane ninja" on top ...
"Ready little brother" said Ryoma holding the gashat
"Ready!" Naruto said as they both press the button on the device
[Hurricane / Maelstrom ninja!]
To the surprise of both of the Eteran ninjas behind Naruto and Ryoma was a panel with the image of their respective gashat as a place a rush of energy rhodium ...
"Henshin!" they girtaron both inserting the gashat
[Gasshato!]
And then they pulled the lever open with a black panel with the figures of an armed character appears
[Gashat! Level Up!]
Soon two panels one blue and the other orange tree appeared in front of the two
[Maki! Maki! Tatsumaki! Hurricane Ninja!]
[Maki! Maki! Uzumaki! Maelstrom Ninja!]
The two panels joined their respective users as on Ryoma's side a whirlwind of wind covered him while Naruto was one of water ... Now in front of Mizki were two armored figures ...
Ryoma's new suit consisted of a navy blue ninja suit on the lower part of his body while the upper one was silver with the mesh design as if it were a jacket attached to the suit with orange edges. Pieces of gray black armor seemed thin but very strong were on his chest and small shoulder pads, on his back was a kind of silver backpack where he keeps two swords. His arms and legs had protectors with sharp blades on one end. His face was covered by a mounthplat mask, an orange-shaped anime-style viewfinder, a metal plate on top of them and a white pointed hair with two long strands on the sides of the mask
Naruto's armor was not so different from his brother's, in fact for some reason his body had grown to be at the same height as Ryoma. His suit had the same aesthetic but his was a suit denied with the top orange opaque with designs of claws and silver edges, the armor was a metal orange with shoulder pads slightly wider than his brother and with a red swirl on the sides, the metal blades on his arms and legs were jagged and on his back he had the same backpack but with only one sword. The mask was the same but the mouthpalt had three mustache marks on the sides, his anime eyes were deep blue and the hair was yellow but without the long strands. Where is the band had two sections that made it look like the ears of a fox
"Now what the hell do they think they are?" I ask angry Mizuki
The two armored figures looked at each other before nodding ...
"The roar of the winds! The darkening of the heavens! The ninja of the hurricans! Fuma!" said Ryoma crossing his arms
"The swirl of water! The impact of waves! The unpredictable ninja! Uzune!" shout Naruto making a movement with his hands
"Unknown by people ..." began Fuma
"Hidden from the world ..." Uzune said
"We will eliminate evil from the shadows!" they both said, drawing their swords - "The armed ninja brothers of Konoha have arrived!"
Iruka looked surprised to see his student standing in a strange suit as he could see that he was ready to fight everything ...
Mizuki frowned angrily as that demon and his supposed brother were interfering in his plans ... The world would be better if everyone were dead! If he kills the demon and his worshiper, people would rebel against the Hokage and free him! Perfect!
"Little demon!" Mizuki roared as he drew one of his giant shurikens. "Only die!" shouted throwing the weapon, he intended to pierce Naruto in the center of the chest.
To his anger, he was lost when Uzune simply blocked him with his sword by throwing it away.
"You just made a big mistake," Naruto growled.
"Indeed, little brother, what if we give him a lesson?" said Ryoma as Naruto nodded - "Well, why do not you do the honor of this fight by saying the phrase?"
" l can?" Naruto asked
"Go ahead, you have the honors" said Ryoma
Naruto smiled under his mask as he slid his hand over the dull edge of his sword - "It's time to go wild! Try to stop us!"
At the moment those words were spoken, both brothers jump disappearing in a blink. Mizuki opened his eyes as he did not see them and when he realized it was too late when Naruto aimed a kick at the head of Mizuki and swerved to one side only for Ryoma's foot to dig into his insides, leaving him breathless.
Then Naruto jumped on his brother's shoulders and on Mizuki, hitting his chest with a double kick before Ryoma again made a double cut to his chest with his swords.
Mizuki screams in pain as the two armed ninjas attacked, their attacks were coordinated and attacked in tandem. Mizuki was not even given time to make stamps to perform jutsu. However, he had something in his pocket that could even the odds. All he needed was the time to use it.
He had been given the ingredients of a child named Kabuto who worked under a common employer they both had. Mizuki had already obtained the ingredients he needed and he was kept in an emergency.
In case some of your plans end up failing.
Even so,he would never need it against two brats.
Naruto took point in the next assault while attacking the silver-haired traitor again. Mizuki saw it coming before moving. When Naruto extended his hand for a punch, Mizuki grabs him by force against him before throwing the blonde back to his teammates.
"I'm not going to end up like this!" Mizuki growled .. "I will have power! I will have wealth! I will have it all!" Sinking a hand in his pocket, Mizuki pulled out a vial filled with some kind of substance.
Mizuki opened the lid of the jar before grinning mischievously. Still smiling, he lowered the contents of the vial without hesitation.
"Now you little fan are going to have it," Mizuki smiled. - "You're going to get it!"
Before the two armed ninjas were about to act, Mizuki's body began to change. His muscles grew almost up to three times what they were. The streaks spread over her shirt opened when her muscles became too big for her. Mizuki did not stop there though. His body moved even more, growing skin and changing into something that would stop tiger.
"I'm going to destroy the two of you!" Mizuki roared as he flexed his claws
"Oh man!" Naruto grimaced. "It's like a demonic version of Kurami-sensei!"
"This is definitely something from Orochimaru ... seriously I have to admit that he is a genius but his creations are crazy ... I still keep asking if the rumors about him sleeping with the snakes are true ... ugh, I do not want to imagine it" said Ryoma with disgust in the last part
"Thanks for the mental image of the pedophile snake, brother" Naruto said without expression
"Do not even mention it, now let's go back to Mr. Furry if it's not a nuisance" said Ryoma as the mentioned demonized tiger charged towards them
Mizuki tried to attack Naruto first but the armed blond evaded his attack and soon the counterattack came and the mutated tiger man did everything possible to defend himself.
The host of the Kyuubi hit hard and fast, never stopped when he attacked the traitor. Ryoma leapt into the fray, once again attacking with their respective styles. He may not be a ninja but he knows how to kick ass in 1000 possible ways
Now Mizuki realized that he was in deep trouble and these spandex children were playing dumb with him.
"RAGH!" Mizuki yelled as he passed his claw to Fuma, causing sparks to jump from his suit.
"Gah!" Fuma shouts unprepared before that attack
"Aniki!" shout Uzune
He suddenly shook his head and pounced on Mizuki angrily while - "That was a mistake!" roared
"I'm not going to let some brats win! "Mizuki roared.
Naruto jumped on Mizuki with his extended sword that shone intensely. The mutated teacher prepared and tried to block the approaching one. A red-orange glow crashed into the tiger humanoid. Mizuki skated back while trying to contain the attack, but Naruto's trick won by sending him to his back.
"Are you okay, aniki?" Naruto asked
"I'm fine," Ryoma replied as he rubbed his chest. "I seriously forget that ninjas can be tough!"
"I'm glad to see you're fine" Naruto said - "So, what's the plan?" he asked as he watched Mizuki stand up.
"It's pretty hard, so ... let's combine our attacks!" said Ryoma
"Combo attack?, I like it, and maybe can use that jutsu I learned from that scroll" Naruto said
"RAAAAHHHH!" Mizuki roared when he finally stood up. Apparently, his huge muscles were a disadvantage when it came to movement.
"Hey, you're in time for your butt to be kicked!" Naruto laughed as he did a handstand - "Here comes the ... Kage bunshin no jutsu!" shouted making a hand position as eight solid clones of him appeared causing everyone to be surprised by such a surprising technique.
"He has achieved it, he has perfected himself in a high level jutsu" - Iruka thought to see the technique his student used
"Je, good trick Naruto will definitely give maximum damage!" said Ryoma - "Now let's finish with this"
Fuma out his gashat, so did Naruto and his clones as they insert it into the slot on the left side of his belt
[Kimewaza!]
The energy covered the bodies of the armed ninjas as they immediately pressed the button of the slot
[Hurrican / Maelstrom critical strike!]
Smoke empowers and rotate his double Kodachi before making tornado bar to his enemy. When Mizuki was covered by the Uzune tornado and his clones made several cuts around him before jumping on top of the whirlpool ...
"Nine kitsune storm slash!" shouted Naruto as he and his clones made a simultaneous descending bar in Mizuki
[ Kaishin no Ippatsu!]
Mizuki let out a loud scream. There was a bright flash on the impact before it followed a deafening explosion, sending dust and dirt in all directions.
When the dust cloud cleared, it showed Mizuki lying in the crater. He was not dead as his chest rose and fell.
The two armed ninja surrounded him, watching him. Slowly, Mizuki's body began to deteriorate when his muscles shriveled and wrinkled, his skin darkened and his hair turned white.
"Ew!" Uzune grimaced under his helmet- "It looks like a plum!"
"What did you little brats do?" Mizuki gasped.
"They did nothing, Mizuki," Iruka said when he arrived.
"It's true, it's your fault, that formula you drank must have been defective" said Ryoma
"No. Orochimaru-sama ..." Mizuki moaned before falling unconscious. He could not believe that a gift from his master failed him.
The sun was beginning to rise to start a new morning ...
"As I love the morning" said Ryoma deactivating his armor, the same did Naruto
Iruka approached his student - "Naruto" said as his student looked at him - "Close your eyes, I have a surprise to give you"
Naruto closed his eyes for a while. "Can I still open my eyes, Iruka-sensei?" He asked.
"-At time, you can open them" Iruka ordered
The boy looked at his brother and then at his sensei who would smile at him without bringing his ninja band.
"Congratulations have approved" said Iruka happy for his student
"Pass?" Naruto said as he began to smile - "Pass ...?! If it happens! You see brother, come in! Now I am a dattebayo ninja!" scream with happiness
"Well done Naruto-boy, I'm proud of you!" said Ryoma with a smile
"The same for me," said a new voice, it was a white-robed basket with a red hat with the fire kanji.
"Hokage-sama / -san / jiji" said the three present
Several other ninjas appeared as they took the unconscious body of Mizuki
"Take him to the hospital, I do not want him to die with us before we get information from him," said Hiruzen.
"Hai, Hokage-sama," several ninjas nodded before going out with him.
Sarutobi sighed as he, Iruka and the two armed ninjas were the only ones left in the clearing. You could see the years reaching the old leader. It lasted a moment before turning to his three
"Konoha owes the three of you a great debt," said Hiruzen, "You have helped eliminate a traitor and spy on a very dangerous man." In gratitude, I will grant each of you the payment of a rank A mission. they have won it. "
"Aw shucks," Naruto smiled as he scratched the back of his head. "We would have done it for free."
"But the money is appreciated," Ryoma nodded. "It will definitely be used for good scientific use ... oh the things we can do" he said emitting a slight maniacal smile
Iruka and Hiruzen blinked before Naruto told them - "Just ignore him, do it all the time and neglect him is not like Orochimaru, I would know it first if that happens"
"Hm," Hiruzen nodded, "Even so, you'll have to go to my office, I have some questions about what I've seen tonight, questions like what are those armor that they're wearing?"
"Oh, are the inventions of aniki, called em ... ninja rider system?" Naruto said a little confused with the name
"Something like that, sometimes I'm not good at naming my invention" said Ryoma, scratching his cheek
"Well, they are, uy awesome," smiled Iruka.
"" Yes. We make rock and we know it! "Naruto smiled.
"You will have to tell me some stories about you, especially you Ryoma-san about the fact that you are not from the village and you have been hidden from our sight" said Hiruzen
"I know, I have a lot to explain but you would not believe me if I told you," Ryoma said.
"Try it" Hiruzen said with a smile- "But first, we have an informational meeting to get in. Then we can celebrate your victory"
"Yahoo! Ichiraku!" Naruto cheered.
As the three adults smiled like the legend of the Hurricane and Malestrom ninja, they have started ...
End of chapter
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