my name is Hannah and this is my first fanfic

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All eyes on me! Crap. I hate being the center of attention.

"Ms. Ride I asked you a question." Said my History teacher .

He waited impatiently as I sat there trying to remember what this week's lesson was about. Mr. Cavanaro was the only teacher at this messed up school that gave a crap whether or not I was paying attention. Most of the teachers learned by now that it wasn't worth it. He was in his mid 30s and didn't look to bad for his age.

" Max!" my best friend Nudge yelled, snapping me out of whatever I was daydreaming about.

"Huh, yeah?" I said, very unaware of anything happening around me. It took me a minute to realize that class had ended and Mr. Cavanaro was staring at me.

"Oh, sorry" I said as innocently as I possibly could.

"Max, we need to talk" the way he said that made me not want to listen anymore it made me want to get to my next class even faster, which to my luck I had a free period.

Mr. Cavanaro continued, " Max I need you to pay more attention in class. I don't want you to have to repeat your senior year." All was quiet and all I could hear were the last words he had said…repeat my senior year? That could NOT happen. I turned to look him strait in the eye and said,

"Is there any way to get my grade up before the Report cards go out?"

He thought about it for a minute and finally said,

"Max your a very bright student and I'm sure that you could figure out a way to raise your grade!" He seemed disappointed! But what did I do that made him expect so much of me? I mean my life isn't that great! I was an orphan, and was adopted by a really nice woman named Anne. Sure she was sweet but I just can't open up to her, you know like really talk to her. Plus she's never home and she has a job working for the government.

" Sorry Max but that's all I can do" he sighed and motioned to the door signaling me to leave. I slowly walked out of the room annoyed about what he had said. HISTORY… who needs history anyway! My thoughts were soon interrupted by a loud screech coming from the bathroom. I swear there was something very familiar about that voice. I walked over to the bathroom to see what had happened and as I walked in my eyes widened in horror. It was her! Out of all the people on this planet it had to be her who transferred to our stupid school?

"Oh Max you come to this horrid school?" the voice cried when she noticed me.

Here we go again, I thought.

"Oh hi Lissa" I called hating to have to say the bratty name again. If there was one thing I hated more than the thought of dying it was Lissa. Lissa made me want to die. She was the most selfish, self-centered, heartless, spoiled girl in the world.

" So what's wrong?" I asked, as if I actually cared what her answer would be.

She thought a moment and she had the most unusual look on her face. Her face was a mix between frightened, confused, and the whole ' I'm the queen of the world, worship me' look. She opened her mouth and began speaking,

" Max? I'm disgusted what is this shity place? I thought highschool was supposed to be different and by different i mean anything but this! I can't believe my mom got a promotion because if she didn't there is no way in HELL that I would ever go to such a nasty school." She finished and looked relieved that she got all her anger out. When I looked up for the first time to actually see her face, I noticed that she was beautiful. And by beautiful I mean drop dead gorgeous! She had long red hair that was crimped and flowed perfectly past her shoulders, She also had variations of brightly colored feathers scattered around her head. She was even prettier than before, not like I'd really noticed her In the first place. She had light skin and green eyes.

I thought about turning to walk out of the bathroom, acting as if I was upset about what she had said and see if it would work so i could get away. To my surprise it did. As I got into the hall I spotted my crush and best friend. Yep that's right I have a crush on my best friend, and no I do not obsess over him like all the other girls at this school.

"Hey!" I heard Nudge call from the opposite end of the hallway.

She looked excited to see me! Might as well go along with whatever she was about to tell me. The look in her eyes said it all. She huried quickly to my side and said,

"Fang broke up with Brigid!" she sreiked almost loud enough for the whole school to hear. I blushed and pulled her into the closest classroom I could spot.

"Nudge!" I said as quiet someone could yell while wispering. She just laghed and began to tease me about how I was so paranoid. I gave her a dirty look and started twords the door. That was the first time I realized that I did care whether Fang was with anyone but me. I did not just think that! But I did! shit this is gonna be a longer year than I had hoped for.

FPOV:

I was just talking to my friends minding my own business as I saw Max walk out of the history classroom. She looked angry, but at the same time beautiful. Max's long hair is a mix between blond and brown that flows perfectly outlining the shape of her face. She has pale skin and the most beautiful sea blue eyes. Sorry sidetracked, So anyways, Nudge yelled something to high pitched for me to hear. When Max heard what she said, she looked relieved, but at the same time embarrassed. Max shoved Nudge in to the closest classroom and began yelling at her. I decided to go see what all the drama was about. I strolled quietly but quickly down the now deserted hallway and reached the classroom. By the time I got there nudge was singing some annoying song teasing Max. I couldn't really make out what the lyrics were. Max blushed then hurried to the door. Shit! If Max saw that I'd been listening she'd kill me for sure! I slid silently out of the way, as the door of the classroom swung open.

"Crap!" said Max under her breath. She realized that class had begun. As she walked off in the other direction I saw Nudge exit the classroom Max had pulled her into. I went over to her and said,

"Shit Nudge, Max looked very embarrassed what did you tell her?" This has got to be good! She thought a moment, probably about whether or not to tell me. She hesitated then said,

" Listen Fang I know you, Max, and I are like the 3 musketeers and all but some things are just better left unsaid." That got me mad. There were no secrets between us! Were there?

" Cut the crap Nudge and just tell me what you said!" Her eyes widened and she finally let out, " girl things, now stay out of it!" that wasn't good enough. I wanted and answer and I intended to get one.

" Nudge" I said sounding curious " I just have one more question." Nudge looked at me cautiously as if I was about to ask her deepest darkest secret and then chuckled when she heard me say, " what did you yell in the hallway during free period?" She thought, might I add with a little smirk on her face and answered, " I told her that you broke up with Brigid." I smiled not knowing why and then forced myself to not ask any more questions. And I had many questions to ask. First off, I had to find Max and confirm that what Nudge said was true. Second, find out why in the world Maximum Ride of all people blushed when she heard I broke up with Brigid. And why did she look relieved? This was going to be the most interesting year yet!

MPOV:

Nudge I'm going to kill you! I thought as I walked into my math class late. My math teacher was not the happiest person on Mondays and apparently it was one, just my luck! My math teacher Mr. Clemo pulled out the discipline log and marked me down for being late.

"Detention!" was the first word that left his mouth. I sighed then sat in my seat 'paying attention' until the end of class. Math was my last period of the day so now off to detention. As I walked into the room I spotted some familiar faces and then I was relived. Nudge, and Fang were sitting next to each other in the back of the room. I slowly went to join them and all of the sudden my heart sped up so fast and hard that anyone near me could hear it. Was it Fang doing this to me? Making me feel butterflies in my stomach every time I thought of him? Not only are we best friends, but also Fang is the absolute hottest guy at this school! Hell he's the absolute hottest guy to walk the face of the planet! He has black hair and he was ripped. By ripped I mean carved in 6 pack! He had trouble expressing his feelings and so did I. oh and one more thing in common that we have, we both HATE Dylan, who happened to be sitting right in that same stupid room! Fang looked up at me and smiled and at that moment all my anger vanished. Back to reality, Its not like I didn't have a reason to hate Dylan. He cheated on me with this slut he met at coffee shop! I bet he didn't even know her name! Dylan made me furious! All the sudden Fang took my arm and pulled me down in his lap and whispered something in my ear. I couldn't tell what he said because I was just so happy that I was sitting in his lap while he comforted me. As long as I was with him everything was ok, all my worries were gone and all I could think about was Fang and his warm perfect lips just an inch away from mine.

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