Sora: Konichiwa! Did you know its 11 where I live? Yup that's right I've been up all night revising dear chapter 1 and posting chapter 7 so I hope you like the story.

Disclaimer: I don't own Tokyo mew mew but the situation and plot of this story belong to me.

CHAPTER 1 REVISED: will you ever be mine?

The wind blew back the pale boys beautiful green hair, the rain licked at his face.

Kish sat on the top of a building in the rain thinking of one thing and one thing only, and that was Ichigo. Flash back: "Ichigo listen to me! you love him so much and I love you so much how can I make you understand how can I make you love me!". He clenched his jaw when he thought of the one Ichigo said she loved. Masaya, his eyes turned to coal and his fists tightened with jealousy. The words flew from his mouth like ravens "Why must she love you I could protect her I could love her so much more than YOU ever could!" The word echoed in the dead black of night. An almost silent word escaped his mouth "why?" Suddenly he heard footsteps in the rain and looked down to be greeted by the form he most longed for. "Ichigo?" he said surprised. Then the realization came that the rooftop he was sitting on was hers.

Ichigo approached the wet front door to her house, fumbling with the handle the door creaked and she shouted in a nonchalant tone "Okasaan Ojosaan im home!"

The smell of miso resonated from the kitchen, someone was cooking. "Konbanwa Ichigo! How was your date with Aoyoma-kun?" said Sakura (Ichigos mom). Blush immediately found ichigos' face, her mother always asked this question when she had been out with Masaya. She smiled and replied automatically "it was fine mom". The pink feline marched up to the bathroom to take a shower now unaware of the alien watching her through the windows.

Kish watched Ichigo grab a towel from the closet and enter the bathroom. The sound of water running was almost non-present in the pouring rain, but h e heard it. "Maybe there's a window that looks in on the bathroom" he wondered. His face turned red at the thought "I've got to stop thinking like this!" the words were dripping with sarcasm.

A few minutes later Ichigo emerged from the bathroom in her pajamas "I have to get to bed" Ichigo sighed. A smile played across her lips and she opened the door to her room, stretching as she stepped in. Lazily she walked over to her pink bed and covered herself with the warm comforter. "Good night" she said to herself as she closed her eyes.

At this point Kish was still at her window. He marveled at the site before him "Ichigo you look so beautiful when you're sleeping will you ever be mine?" he said quietly. "I guess I better go" a sigh escaped, at this Kish teleported back to his ship only to dream of the cat-girl.

Kish awoke the next morning to see Tarutos face.

"And where were you last night?"Sneered the pipsqueak. Kish felt his stomach drop. "None of your business!" he barked. The younger alien was relentless "At a certain neko-chan's house I suppose." He sneered. Taruto was constantly bugging him about what he called the "old hag and "your neko-chan"."GO AWAY!" was all the distressed Kish could angrily manage. "
You know she'll never be yours Kish" laughed the impish little fiend. At this Kish grabbed a glass cup and forced it to soar through the air it the annoyance. It hit him in the head. "I'm telling pie!" screeched Taruto. Kish gave a sigh of pure agitation "And guess what? He breathed "I DON'T CARE!" he practically screamed. Then quickly he buried his head in his pillow trying to block out the boy's words but they echoed over and over in his head "she'll never be yours Kish"

Kish: Sora, you're mean

Sora: No I'm not...you'll thank me later nya!

AUTHORS NOTE

Hi! This is 1st time author Sora-Chan I hope you enjoyed the revised version of this first chapter I think it's a lot better well review away!