Dai-Rai-Dan: Hi everyone this is my first story

Sasuke: Yeah and probably your last with your lame writing skill

Sakura: That's mean

Naruto: Yeah, Teme

Dai-Rai-Dan: Sasuke, say it again in my next storiy i'll have You,Orochimaru,and Itachi riding ponies, while singing.

Sasuke: NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

Dai-Rai-Dan:Sakura, please do the disclaimer.

Naruto: What about me

Dai-Rai-Dan: Here's an infinite amount of ramen.

Naruto: Yay

Dai-Rai-Dan: Now, Sakura the disclaimer

Sakura: Dai-Rai-Dan does not own Naruto


Hyuuga Hinata sat at her desk, thinking of a poem to best tell a certain blonde, hyperactive, knucklehead her feelings.

"Hinata, What are you doing?" Neji asks walking in.

"Ummm... Nothing" She replies

"Your writing a poem for Naruto aren't you?" he asks

"Me, no, why would I write a poem about Naruto-Kun, he's great and all but... Neji watched as Hinata rambled on, until he finally said

"Oh, come off it Hinata-Sama, everyone except him knows you like him, hell even Hiashi-Sama knows." Neji says

"Oh No, Father knows" Hinata gasped

"Yes he does, and he says, he is okay with it" Neji replies.

"Really, he is" she asks hopefully

"Really, now don't you have a poem to be writing" he reminds her

"Oh yes, your right I must finish." she replies

"Oyasumi Hinata-Sama" Neji says tiredly.

"Oyasumi Neji-Nii-San." she replies


The Next Day
When Hinata was walking to Naruto's Apartment, she was having second thoughts.

'What if he doesn't like it, he might laugh or reject me'

But next thing she knew she was at Naruto's apartment

'It's now or never' she thought to herself, as she knocked on the doorway. She felt her pulse increase with each passing second.

Until Naruto opened the door. "Oh, Hinata-Chan, what are you doing here?" he asked " I-I w-wanted t-to give y-you t-this, h-here."

she replied. She handed it to him, and when he opened the letter it he read:

Roses are red,

Violets are blue.

Uzumaki Naruto,

I Love You.

With your foxy grin,

And sky-blue eyes.

It makes me feel,

Hypnotized.

"You're a very good poet, Hinata-chan. Now here's my poem for you" he said. Astonished, Hinata shakily took the letter from his hands. When she opened it she read:

Hyuuga Hinata,

Pretty as can be.

It may sound corny,

But you complete me.

Eyes like the moon,

A smile like the stars.

But to me you are,

the most beautiful around ,by far.

"You're not such a bad poet yourself Naru-kun" she says. "Arigatou, Hina-Chan" he replies. Before Hinata knew it they were locked in a passionate kiss. When they broke apart, Naruto only said two words " Aishiteru, Hina-Chan" "Aishiteru, Naru-Kun" she replied. Right then and there did she realize that this was a dream come true.


So how was did i do for my 1st story. Please send Reveiws