Bowling with the Cullens
Ok, my first story ever. So constructive criticism please and tell me all that's wrong about it ).
Disclaimer: Yes, Yes, we all know that the wonderful world of TWILIGHT is not mine so……on with our story!
Chapter 1
(BPOV)
We were at the Cullen's house, or should I say mansion. I was in Edward's room while Alice brought a whole bunch of shopping bags with fancy French and Italian names on them. I was just about to complain about her buying me clothes- when I had a perfectly good closet full of them at Charlie's- when I was interrupted by a beautiful velvet voice that I would recognize anywhere.
"Alice, hurry up!" Edward yelled as he pounded lightly on the door. "I want to see Bella……..desperately I might add."
"Calm down, Edward. You'll have your little human back AFTER we dress her up. Wait for what we have planned for your honeymoon" Rose said with a smirk while she pushed Edward aside and walked in his room. Oh my Carlisle! Please tell me that she didn't just say that!! I thought, and blushed furiously. And then she said innocently, "you forgot this outfit, Alice". She was holding an indigo skin tight and a super short mini skirt.
"Rose, no…..that's no good for today" Alice whined. "She'll probably step past the black line on the lane, slip, fall, and moon everyone. Then YOU would have to deal with Edward"
"Fine, fine. What about this?" Rosalie asked as she held in her pale arms a deep blue v-neck. It was absolutely gorgeous.
"EEK!! That's perfect", Alice squealed. "And we could pair it up with these". She was talking about some light pink and blue plaid Bermuda shorts.
"And those go perfect with these shoes and bowling bag", Rosalie exclaimed. Wow, they were like a well oiled machin- wait! Did she say bowling bag? Why would in the world would I need a bowling bag? Unless…..
"Wait….are we going bowling", I suspiciously asked.
"N-", Rosalie stated. But she was interrupted by an over exited Alice.
"Yes!"
"We wanted it to be a surprise", Rose said acidly. She rapidly perked up though. "But now that you know, go get ready".
I changed in Edward's bathroom as fast as humanly possible. When I came out, Rosalie still mumbled, 'slow human' or 'what took her so long?' or something along those lines. But I was too mesmerized by what she held. She had some deep blue flats with a bow and a matching bowling bag. She handed them to me, gave Alice a blurry high-five and said, "Ok, she's ready".
Edward came in gave me a quick 'hello, love', carried me down the stairs and into his sparkly silver Volvo at vampire speed. He was smiling, very beautifully, the whole way. Well……someone's happy.
That's the first chapter, what did u think? Wanna read more or is just not right? Oh and this is the introducing chapter so don't worry it will be better.