Alrighty guys, my first chapter in which I hope to be a long and successful story I am open to ideas of how to improve with my dialog as well as my emotion writing skill. (Both in which are god awful so anyway to improve would be very helpful) I everyone is grown up so there view on things might vary from the book. I will be adding myself into underland. But other than that without further ado I present GREGOR THE OVERLANDER.

6 years…..

6 god forsaken years…

How did he make it? Where did he find the strength to keep going? He thought as he drowned the rest of his whiskey that he obtained by less than legal means. He sat in his apartment staring at ceiling wallowing in his self-pity. He got out of his bed and headed for the bathroom. He entered bathroom. He looked in the mirror. His scars started to fade, but the purple stuff they gave him for his scars worked somewhat. Buuut then he lost it in the move. So now five slash marks occupied his light brown chest. But his other scars faded somewhat. The suction cup marks were no longer super visible from when he battle the squid. The cutter marks and nicks now faded as well. But the scars an emotional pain he felt all those years ago were still very much there.

Over the years gregor got through by working out…. heavily. He was well built, an honestly if he tried he could probably lift up ripred. He stripped down and stepped in the shower. Now it was not as good as washing up in regalia but this would do. He stepped out of the shower and walked to his dresser. New York in June was surprisingly quiet and hot. He picked out a pair of cargo shorts (not caring since his scars are somewhat faded) and a light blue t-shirt saying 0 fucks given. He walked over to the fridge and pulled out some fruit and whiskey (man he had to get his life together). He thought about this and decided it was best to water down his beverage. He consumed everything quickly and left.

His life in Virginia was simple he dealt with lots of bullies, girls (being and toned African-American made him a target for bullying as well as girls wanting to date him. He almost did fuck this one girl Hannah but left at the last possible second saying he couldn't do it), and lots of bullshit in general. He was amazed himself when he actually graduated. He got and to fights rarely but every now and again one came his way. This one time he was at his locker reminiscing about his time with Luxa When one of the school bullies snuck up behind him and took the pic from his hand.

"ugggghhh" jack said in complete disgust "who's this BITCH? She's so FUCKING UGLY"

Gregor looked real calm but on the inside he really really really wanted to ram a sword right through this guy's gut.

"I'm gonna count to five an you're going to give me my picture back. Should you choose not to I will end you." Gregor said in a super calm voice. There was a large ooooohhhhhh from the crowd. No one had really threatened Jack before.

"Is that a threat? ." Jack laughed and so did his so called friends. "1" Gregor started counting

"oooo I'm so scared I'm quaking in my boots" Jack voice dripped in sarcasm.

"5"Gregor said with a smile as he looked up. Jack stopped laughing. And looked at were gregor was to see a fist in his place. As Gregor fist connected with Jacks face he felt the bones in his face crumple under his sheer force of the punch. Jack clasped his face and fell to the ground. Gregor looked up at Jacks "friends". Looked stunned for a minute as Gregor picked up his photo and turned to them. There looks f confusion were replaced by anger. They all pulled 9mm and took aim at Gregor. He felt the familiar flow of adrenaline as he his vison splintered and he let the rager sense take over. He instantly started dodging bullets. Spinning an flipping far faster than he thought possible. He then made his way to the 4 goons. He started kicking in knees breaking arms etc. By the time he was finished he stood over 5 people groaning in pain. Unaware he himself ate a few bullets he continue on with his day at the hospital.

After he got sewn up and discharge he left. He was suspended though but he wasn't to mad. It gave him more time to work out. Following his return he was feared. Most kids at school feared him. They didn't think he was human. He was feared until his last year of High school. When he won the track championship. He was then offered a scholarship to NYU. He thankfully accepted. His Prom year he stayed alone. He sat in the corner crying over his past wallowing in his self-pity drinking whiskey from a punch glass. He was about to go when these girls walked over to him.

"Hey, Gregor"

Gregor looked an acknowledged there presence with a nod before taking another swig of whiskey. It was Rebecca with her two friends, Lora an Audrey. Rebecca was by no means short. She was at least 5'10. Brown hair, Light green eyes and a seductive smile. Lora was blonde and had stormy grey eyes. She as well was very tall. Audrey was the tallest. She was 6, 1 brown eyes and chubby cheeks. "We were wondering if you want to come to this after party with us."

Gregor could tell she was doing this out of the kindness of her heart and he would have declined but he had nothing better to do so we went along. The house they took him to was along a lake the house was beautifully decorated for prom but like most parties after prom they were extremely unsupervised. But the party well under way. There were kids jumping off the roof into the lake people doing belly shots and all type of crazy shit. And then there was Najeh. Now he was basically the definition of a party animal. He gave zero fucks for his own safety. Some rumors gone around saying that some of the kids watched him die but he returned to school the next perfectly fine an un-harmed. He was one of the kids jumping of the roof. He turned got as far back as possible got a running start an took off an leapt. It was an easy 30 ft plummet from the roof of the house to the lake but Najeh didn't care. He said it himself he lived for adrenaline.

He emerged from the water with a wide eyed excitement. His kept his afro low and tamed. His neon green hockey shirt soaked and his camo green basketball shorts just as wet. He then proceeded to go back into the house to dry off. Gregor reluctantly went into the house. To his surprise he found Najeh drying off on the couch alone an drinking … heavily. Yet, he seemed unfazed. Like he wasn't drunk, which was weird because Gregor watch him down 3 beers. He dried the best he could an looked up to see gregor eying him cautiously. He walked over to Gregor an attempted to strike up a conversation. But the efforts seemed futile as gregor was paying him any mind. Then he mention something about whiskey. Lots of it. And this got Gregor's attention. Najeh motioned for him to follow and Gregor did. Najeh led him through a large doorway to which held the greatest collection of whiskey he had ever seen. Gregor tried to speak but Najeh covered his mouth with his hand and said "drink". Najeh and Gregor probraly finished the entire collection. That's when they heard sirens. Gregor memory was supper fuzzy after that. He remembers Najeh saying "5-o 5-o here come the po-po!". And He hoisted gregor over his shoulders and then gregor woke up at home.

He had a raging head ache. His head was killing him. He was in his room. O thank gawd. Wait! What happened to Najeh? Was he Okay? How did he get home? What day was it? What time? So many questions and so little answers. He needed to find out about last night. He rolled out of be and regretted his decision immediately. His head thump even harder. And he could barely stand. He got up against his will and left his room. He waddled to the bathroom to get a good look at himself. He had noticeable bags on his eyes and his hair was a mess. He got in the shower and it seemed to calm him a bit. On Monday he got to school everyone gave him prideful looks. Gregor was confused at first an then decided he need to find Najeh. He went to Najeh's locker an waited. Just as he was about to leave he's see a figure sprinting down the hall towards him. It was Najeh who was very out of breathe as he reached his locker.

"Sup" *pant, pant* "Gregor, how's life?" Najeh stopped to catch his breath.

"I'm fine" Gregor said with a hint of worry in his voice.

"Dude what happened last night? I remember getting piss poor drunk an you saying something about the police an then I woke up at home."

"O clutch. Totally Hoped I dropped you off in the right house. But meet me after school I'll tell you the story over a drink."

"Thanks man" Gregor tried to smile but he couldn't bring himself to do it. Najeh nodded an headed to class. Throughout the rest of the day gregor got more looks from people like they all approved of what he did. But what did he do? It wasn't until Last period when He was confronted by a group of girls who expected him to do something. When he finally looked up he saw Rebecca, Audrey a few other girls he recognized from around school. They just stood there looking very displeased. When they made it clear when they weren't moving he finally asked.

"Did I do something wrong?" he finally broke the silence

They glared at him for a few seconds for finally speaking.

"You did unspeakable things last night. "Rebecca finally spoke up

"Well would be as kind as to fill me in because I don't remember anything" gregor said

"How could you not remember?!" Rebecca practically screamed which only agitated gregor Head ache even more. They had everyone in study hall's attention. "YOU RAPED HER" Rebecca said in outrage. Whoa rape? Gregor didn't even remember leaving the whiskey room let alone entering a bedroom. With another girl? Gregor was very confused. And judging by the look of the other girls they could tell he didn't know what the fuck they were talking about. So After Rebecca and the group of girls sat down an explained what happened he was shocked. He really didn't know what to make of the situation.

So apparently the cops never came. It was just the kids who weren't invited to the party played a prank on them. But after the whole mishap was sorted out Gregor continued to explore the house. He went upstairs to find nothing but sex in all of the rooms. Sometimes orgies sometimes 1on 1. But when he was on his way down stairs Lora came upstairs. She said she was looking for something an asked Gregor for help. Gregor followed behind her as she walked very seductively swinging her hips back an fourth. She led Gregor into a bedroom and she closed the door behind her and locked it. Making sure they were undisturbed. She pushed him on the bed and gregor drunk and happy played along. She went in for a kiss but gregor stopped her with his finger. She shot him a questionable glance. Her eyes seem to beg for an explanation. And gregor who finally could take it broke down in front of her.

He explained everything. From the beginning to end. He spared her no detail. She sat there intently completely intrigued. When he finished she of course didn't believe him. And that's when he had to lift his shirt up to reveal the 5 long scars that ran diagonally across his chest. She instinctively moved her hands across the scars an felt sorry for gregor. She hugged him. And they just sat there for who knows how long. Just talking. After the whole mishap the group of girls left gregor.

Gregor met Najeh later that evening for the drink he promised him. They didn't talk much about the party though. They sat in silence just drinking whiskey. Then Gregor shook hands with Najeh and eventually went their separate ways. It wasn't long until gregor went away for college at NYU. He was sad but happy he was returning after all these years. He had recently found out that Najeh was also was going to attend NYU. When they were on the rode they both rarely spoke. They had only spoke when one of them was hungry or had to piss. Other than the radio it was silent. And that's the way they both liked it. Silent

First chapter complete an HOLY SHIT that was very time consuming time to see what they think.

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"Hey guys" gregor and Najeh turn the heads as they look at the author. Gregor looks at the author and Najeh back an fourth multiple times in utter confusion. "whaaaaa?"

"Sup dude" Najeh nods

"Sup bro" Najeh202 nods back

"What the hell is going on here?" Gregor Asks in confusion

*Najeh202 explains everything *

"Well first off I must say, you suck at writing" gregor nagged

Najeh202 tilts his head back and groans "tell me something I don't know"

"Well you could watch videos on YouTube on how to be a better writer" Najeh suggests.

"I would but that sounds like a lot of work, but other than that you guys have nothing for me to build off of?" Both Najeh, and Gregor look at the ground in silence. "Very well. You two should be returning back to the underland in the next chapter." Najeh202 sighs.

"Bye guys" Najeh202 waves

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"Well I need better Ideas"

ANNNNNNND DONE GOD DAMN that took FOR EVER. I now see why other authors don't upload daily that was a lot of work. You I skipped class to write this so you better glad I value this over calculus. Anyhow I will try to make the story long as fuck. Because I like a story that is long as hell. So my next chapter should be out within the week of my first REVIEW. SO ALL YOU STALKERS OUT THERE BEWARE. Also I have no clue what the next chapter will be about. But ill wing it. And always R&R. Pm any questions you may have about the story or others you may want me to write.

This is NAJEH202 over an out.