Hi guys this is my 1st Fan fiction ever so please review.
Chapter 1: Blood Test
Draco tossed and turned in his sleep as sweat gathered on his forehead. Visions of chaos streamed through him, making him twitch and shake. Walls covered in blood, his mother screaming, his father scrambling to her side before he too was wiped into oblivion by the piercing green light and in the distance a cold grimace on his dark lord's face. Waking in fear, Draco couldn't help remembering the events of earlier that day. "Never betray me as your late parents did, or you too shall suffer". With that the dark lord came closer and stared at Draco, who was crouched in a dank corner of the dungeon. As he stared into Draco with his glowing red eyes, Draco felt as if his head were being spilt apart. "You shall be my true servant. The power is within you waiting to emerge. Nothing born of this world will turn your loyalty. But if that was to happen, I have even greater plans for you" he said with a slight accent on the 'S's.hmm….. His parselmouth must be playing up thought Draco. "SILENCE!Screamed the dark lord. "Insolence will not be tolerated". With that he griped Draco's arm and plunged his wand hard into the flesh. Burning heat seared into the bone and Draco felt his heart begin to tighten.
A dark green haze clouded Draco's eyes and while the pain numbed, it slowly formed into a skull. The dark mark swirled in his vision as the dark lord levitated him high into the air. Looking determined, the greatest of all dark wizards raised a blood red gem the size of his fist. Muttering an incantation he let the gem fly directly at Draco. The gem swirled around Draco's paralysed body leaving a trail of red light that formed an incasement. As the gem slowed it came through the veil of light and hovered above his heaving chest. Now spinning rapidly, it began its decent, into Draco. The roar of a wounded animal echoed through the dungeon as the stone began its cruel path of destruction. Pain came in hot waves as its sharp tip broke the flesh, spilling blood, and drove in harder .Like a corkscrew it burrowed through the muscles and chewed its way through the feeble body. Draco could barley breath, his constant scream silenced. The neck muscles contorted but no sound escaped his lips. Shuddering, he let the pain wash over him as he slipped further in to the dark realm of death. Below, the dark lord was now smiling wickedly at his silencio spell and made a final jerk with his wand. The orb of ruby light that had now become Draco surged and shrunk, into the body it had encased. Now a totally limp figure dangling in the air, a second passed as the remains of the light sunk into his skin.
Eyes blinked open .With a huge gasp for air Draco returned from the gate he had been about to enter…. or had he already opened it? He remembered the tendrils of light that had drawn him closer to the handle but then a strange red glow had ruined the peaceful white of the landscape. Then he had been hurtled back to his body, the body that would now be irrepealably damaged. A cripple, he would live out his days in torment until he saw the white fields with the inviting door again. Maybe he would seek them, as until now the peace had been eluding him. Maybe he would cut himself until he felt the same pain as before. No...not the same pain, that was unbearable, perhaps just enough to remind him of his goal. Resigned to his fate, he absentmindedly felt his chest. Looking down in shock he realised something was wrong. The gapping wound that had sent him to the white fields was not there. The ripping and tearing of muscle and bone had left no mark. Impossible, he thought as he frantically probed the pale skin. Nothing could cause that much pain and leave no wound or even a blood mark .Confused, he didn't realise that the dark lord had lowered him. "You have past the test my young one. I see you shall grow into a powerful servant".
While Draco was still digesting all the events that had occurred, Voldemort quickly place the dark mark on Draco's arm. Draco surprised himself when he didn't even flinch. Voldemort cackled "You shall indeed make the best of servants. All but you have felt pain beyond compare. You are special. The pain inflicted by the blood stone is incredible; it burns nerves and destroys minds. You have proved today that you are my chosen one and that you alone will be able to stand the final test of loyalty to me. After your ordeal today you will now find that other pain is meaningless. Use this to your advantage." With that he faded and disappeared in the darkness. Draco stared at his new dark mark and watched as it faded as his lord left. Still coming to terms with his new found position, he gripped his chest as a bolt of pain made his heart skip a beat. "Shit" he cursed as the pain past…obviously after that ordeal he would need to rest.
Where the gem went after it tore through him and how a huge wound could vanish baffled him, but it must have happened as the after pain was all too real. As he limped away, Draco knew deep inside that he have change in more ways then Voldemort had told him. But content to just rest for now, he ignored the voice in his heart that said something was not right. Besides, school started in a week and with the demise of his traitorous parents, he was now the heir to the Malfoy mansion and their sizable fortune. Books had to be bought, a little fun was left to be had and his master had now given him a purpose, had put his trust in him. Life, for the first time in the last few years, was looking good.
Did you like it? That was my 1st try ever so please tell me what you think. I will update as soon as I can.