Aztec story
I walk along the market road and look at the food at one both. While everyone's backs were turned I grab a handful of corn and started to walk away, until a rough dry hand grabbed my left shoulder blade and started to pull me back. I elbow his chest and then duck. I run as fast as I can and to a back of an ally. I look behind me to see if I lost him but to find 5 big men behind me. I pass five boxes and push them over as I run by to slow them down. I keep running until is see a familiar passage that only I knew. As I slip in I come to a fork in the road I ran to the left and come upon a abandon building, a rundown shack that was only had mud walls and straw on top. When I first found it there was only three half walls and a full wall with a doorway with no door. Two weeks after I found it and full hour days the walls were complete and I managed to nick a enough hay to create a roof and a bed.
I walk in and put the corn that I got and put it in a bag in the corner of the small but roomy area.
As I should of mentioned my name is coatl and I am 16 and homeless. My mother was sacrificed for the crime of theft and my father is still unknown to me .I have a sister named nelli and she is 15, she got her name because she always tell the truth which leaves me to the all the thefts I do to keep us alive. This brought my name coatl because the meaning means snake. Suiting for me because like a snake; I can always get myself out of trouble, for now anyways.
I cannot wait to get out of here and see the world. I do not believe in sacrifice because what being god or not would want peoples death, god or not.
My plan is to store away in the wooden container and wait till the floater arrives to different land. Now only if I could get my sister to agree. I will not let her be alone to die in a such a horrible place!
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