Heart Stopper Remastered Version
Lian: Hello everybody, this is your author here. Now when I first joined I wrote a story called "Heart Stopper" Which still aint finished, as I have decided, since I have become way better with my writing, I was going to re-write the whole thing. A hell of a lot is going to be changed, as I think I can write it a whole lot better (The start is going to be entirely changed I think) . But before I ramble on anymore, I'll have my OC, Allyssa, do the disclaimer
Allyssa: Lian (Spinster-Magic95) Does not own Beyblade or any of it's characters. However, he does own this story, the plot and his OC's, such as myself.
*Max quickly dashes in*
Max: Don't forget to enjoy reading folks!
Lian: Thanks Max, now on with the show!
It was a regular day at Tyson's dojo, all of them training and practicing their techniques.
"You know guys" Said Rei, in between multiple sit ups. "It's been awhile since the last world championships. I hope one comes along soon"
"Yeah me too!" Shouted Tyson excitedly "Been a while since we squared off against our old pals"
Kai stood against a tree, not saying a word, only nodding at Tyson's comment.
Max was busy testing out Draciel's new attack ring, with a good amount of success. Kenny was typing away, getting the data off Draciel while Hilary leaned over Kenny's shoulder to read the data.
After about ten minutes, Kai finally spoke up. "Trainings done for the day"
Tyson looked a little bit suprised. "An hour earlier than normal. But I'll take the extra hour, thanks Kai" He spoke up smiling as he walked inside.
Since the Justice Five tournament, Kai had changed, only a little though. He was now more tolerant of Tyson, and now smiled more often and even joined in the fun when the team were doing pranks or playing video games.
"Me and Rei are going to my house" Said Max as he and Rei walked through the house.
"I think I'll go take a walk" Said Kai, moving off the tree and began walking. Hilary joined him, he did not mind her tagging along at all. At least it gave him someone to talk to.
"One truly is the lonliest number, eh Chief?" Teased Dizzi
"Don't you start" Laughed Kenny as he continued his typing
Meanwhile, Rei and Max were close to Max's house. Since the last tournament, Max and Rei have begun hanging out together on a regular basis.
The two were the best of friends.
"So Rei" Max chimed up a moments silence.
"Yes Max?" Asked Rei, looking up from the ground.
"I was wondering about those teams we've met and fought some time back, I wonder where they are now"
"You'll have to be more specific" Chuckled Rei lightly "We've battled plenty of teams"
"Well, I was more thinking of the Saint Shields and our friends from team Psykick." Answered Max, his eyes drifting off into a random direction.
"True, they did seem to dissapear off the face of the earth it seems" Said Rei, flipping a coin in his hand.
"You were rather close to Salima though, Rei" Said Max in a teasing voice.
"Don't start Max" Replied Rei, in a even more of a teasing voice than Max. "You were even closer to Mariam"
"What can I say..." Max chuckled nervously. "I Love her"
"Maybe one day you'll get the chance to tell her that Max" Smiled Rei
"Let's hope so, Emily wont get off my back with continuous texts, emails and calls" Laughed Max
"She seems a little stalkerish, don't you think?" Asked Rei, though he never got the answer to that question.
"Hey, is that who I think it is who just walked into the bey-shop?" Max asked as he pointed towards them, Rei turned his head and looked. He saw a redheaded girl, about his age. Wearing a black jacket and a grey skirt.
"Max, That's Salima!" Rei shouted excitedly. "Let's go inside"
Max opened the door to hear Salima ask.
"Excuse me Mr Tate, but is Max and Rei in? I'm good friends with them"
Rei silently crept up behind Salima and tapped her on the shoulder.
"Does this answer your question?" Said Rei laughing.
"Rei! It's you!" Shouted Salima happily as she flung her arms around him and hugged. Though suprised at first, Rei hugged back.
"It's only been a year, but it feels way longer than that" Said Rei, Salima still in his arms.
"I know, I've missed you so much Rei." Said Salima without thinking, which made her blush.
"I missed you too" was Rei's reply.
"I'm mainly here for the new world championships, me and the others are competing"
"Really? That's great! I was wondering when a new world championships would come about"
Salima thought for a moment, then told Rei. "I've recently got in contact with Kai, I told him about the new world championships, he's already signed you guys up for it."
"Well in that case, thanks Salima" Said Rei as Mr Tate handed Max a sheet that showed which teams would be competing.
The teams that are competing in this years world championships are:
The Bladebreakers
Kai, Rei, Tyson and Max
White Tiger X
Lee, Kevin, Mariah and Gary
Blitzkrieg Boyz
Tala, Spencer, Bryan and Ian
PPB All Starz
Michael, Rick, Eddy and Emily
F Dynasty
Julia and Raul
Team Psykick
Kane, Goki, Jim and Salima
Super Soldiers (Formerly Barthez Battalion)
Miguel, Mathilda, Aaron and Claude
Team Elite (Formerly BEGA Bladers)
Mystel, Crusher, Garland and Ming Ming
The Majestics
Robert, Enrique, Oliver and Johnny
The Legion
Ryuusei, Allyssa, Mitzuki and Tomas
Group A
The Bladebreakers
The Majestics
Team Psykick
PPB All Starz
F Dynasty
Group B
The Legion
White Tiger X
Team Elite
Super Soldiers
Blitzkrieg Boyz
"The tournament starts in two days" Said Salima smiling.
"Okay, two questions" Said Max. "First, why isn't Brooklyn blading in this tournament? and secondly, who are The legion?"
"I'll answer that for you" Said a voice, all eyes turned towards the door. A girl stood there, same age as Rei and Max (sixteen in this fanfic) She had brownish blonde hair with a little emo fringe covering her right eye. She also had a plain white T-shirt on, with a denim vest over the top. She also sported a denim skirt that stopped short of her knees, accompanyed by blue leggings underneath the skirt. She also sported white and black sneakers.
"Good day to you" Said Rei smiling at her. "Who are you though exactly?"
The girl just giggled shyly. "My name is Allyssa, Allyssa Marie Parker to be exact. Im a part of the blading team, The Legion. Nice to meet you"
"Who exactly are The Legion though?" Asked Max, suddenly filled with interest in the team.
"Were nobody special, we just competed in some qualifying matches to get here. Very lucky indeed, seeming as we took on the Saint Shields in the last qualifier" Said Allyssa, who just looked around the shop.
"You beat the Saint Shields?" Said Max, shocked.
"Yeah, we barely made it though. Tomas lost to Joeseph, I drew against Mariam. Mitzuki beat Dunga and Ryuusei, our captain, defeated Ozuma"
"And to answer your first question" Salima said as soon as Allyssa finished. "Brooklyn has become a commentator"
"He has the voice for it certainly" Giggled Allyssa.
"Hey Allyssa" Said Rei. "Can we have a look at your blade?"
"Sure" She smiled as she took out her blade. Her blade was black with a gold trim around the attack ring.
"This is Fanfir, I somehow discovered Fanfir during my battle with Mariam. Though I never used it, it gained me some much needed self confidence."
"Would you mind if I challenge you to a beybattle then?" Asked Max, whipping Draciel out of his pocket.
Allyssa chuckled. "If you insist"
Coming up in chapter two: The beybattle, Tyson meets Tomas and the teams arrive in the city.
Lian: Well, I think that chapter was a million times better than the last one I cooked up on this story.
Max: I wanna know what happens, tell me dude!
Lian: You'll find out in due course.
Allyssa: Don't forget to rate and review guys, see you in chapter two!