Disclaimer. I do not own Kim Possible, nor do I intend to achieve any monetary gain with the story.
Greetings fellow readers. For a long time I've read the stories and I think it is about time for me to try and write my own. I have another quite unique story going bit by bit and I have ideas on chapter two for this one. Since it is my first time in any sort of story writing, strict review would be appreciated. I did my best to write clearly and non repetitive.
"KP! Oh, I thought you were down for the count!"
I am Kim Possible. And I am a fool.
A fool to think that a guy like Eric could ever like me. A sensitive, caring, great looking guy falling for me? Me, of all people? Someone who would ditch everything for some crisis at any given time? A girl that is tougher than any man you know? It was too good to be true.
I am Kim Possible. And I felt for it.
"Why couldn't I see that he was a fake?"
"Yeah, you don't get much faker than a syntho-drone, oooooh you kissed a syntho-drone?!"
"I never kissed him…but I wanted to…"
"Ok, too much info. So, what's the plan?"
A plan? A plan for what? Escape? And what good would that do? You think we can stop them? We're tied to a giant cactus with no gadgets and nobody to come and save us. Even my battle suit was still off-line. They didn't even bother guarding us as if to mock me even more. Drakken and Shego knew I was powerless and they were right.
I am Kim Possible. And I am nothing.
"Ron, I…I got nothin'!"
"That's my line and what's worse, that's quitter's talk!"
And what else can I say Ron? My dreams shattered, my confidence crushed. I am a freak. An abomination who was foolish enough to think it could save the world. No more.
I am Kim Possible. And I can't change anything.
"Drakken finally won… I should have stuck to babysitting."
"Alright, K.P, this pity fiesta is over! Drakken has not won, he played you! Now it's payback time! And you know…there are guys out there that are better for you than Eric, guys that are real for one thing…"
Something stirred in me. How do you keep doing it Ron? How can you make me rise at a time like this? How do you know exactly what to tell me?
"You really think there is a guy out there for me?"
"Out there…in here…"
And as if the gates were opened, a sudden wave of confidence flooded the void in my hearth.
I am Kim Possible. And I have been blind.
Blind to the one guy I knew I could trust. To the one who has been behind me all my life, encouraging me, supporting in any way he could. I have neglected him for too long.
But maybe it's too good to be true?
"Oh, really?"
"Yeah, I mean guys like…
Like you Ron? I already know what you are going to say. And you are right. But right now, there are more important matters to attend to. Like stopping Drakken and his Diablos.
I am Kim Possible. And it's payback time!
But first, we need to escape. Perhaps I could…
"Rufus?"
"Rufus? " What does he have to do with anything? Oh right! "RUFUS! You can save us!"
I'm free. And it's time to show them that my name is Kim Possible.
And I can do anything!