A/N:
Thank you for taking your time to read my NaruHina love story. It took me four days to write it. This is a romance based on the Anime, Naruto. This story is about how Hinata is forced by TenTen to go on a date with Naruto. Naruto has no ides on what's going on and is shocked by what Hinata ends up confessing.. Hinata makes a huge mistake and ruins the plan and ends up regretting everything.
What will Naruto say? Is he going to accept her for who she is? Or is he going to reject her?
Read to find out ;)
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Enjoy! :D
7:45 am, Saturday morning..
It's a beautiful morning In Konoha, birds are cherping, the streets
are quiet and the weather was just right... It's the perfect day to
stay in bed and sleep.
But suddenly, Hinata is being shaken and yelled at while she's
asleep,
"Hinata! Hinata! Wake up already!"
As Hinata opens her eyes she is frighten by who she sees..
"TEN-TEN! wha- what are you doing here? How did you get in my
apartment? What time is it? What-"
Hinata was than cut off by Ten-Ten
"Shut it Hinata" she yelled at her. " Now listen, today's the day, so
I had to wake you up extra early to prepare"
"what day? Pr-prepare what" she stuttered in confusion
"the day I hook you up with Naruto" she said as she giggled and
pulled Hinata out of bed.
"WHAT! HUH? Wait, I never agreed to this " Hinata tried to explain
as she was dragged to her bathroom.
as they walked in Ten-Ten shut and lock the bathroom door
"what's going on here Ten?" she shouted
"Listen to me, Hina" TenTen whispered, as if someone else was
listening..
"I see how you react around Naruto, ever since we've been
kids, I KNOW how you feel about him, "
"and..." hinata said, wanting TenTen to make her point.
"And as your friend, I feel I should be there for you" she said as
she gave Hinata a warm smile
"Ok..." hinata said with a sigh " but in one condition" Hinata
shot back
"hmmm?"
"if this 'date' goes wrong, or breaks my friendship with Naruto-
kun, the guilt is on you!" she pleaded
" what ever you say..."
" Now take off your clothes and take a bath!" she requested with a
yell, loud enough for neighbors' to hear.
" HUH? No!" Hinata said while she covered her chest as if to hide
her self.
"Don't worry, silly, I'll step out of the bathroom, I need you to
bathe because i'm gonna give you a makeover" she said with a excite look
"A makeover? But i'm perfectly fine, and plus, Naruto isn't in to
'glamorous' girls" Hinata stated
"But who says you can't look nice for him"
"Alright, alright.. But can I have some privacy?" Hinata asked
as if to lead her out of the bath room"
"Alright, alright" ten-ten mocked
a short while later, Hinata is out of the bathroom, hair damped and
wet and shivering from the cool breeze of her open window
"Ok, now sit down here and i'm gonna explain to you my plan on
making Naruto notice you"
"I'm listening.." Hinata said with a bored look.
"Ok, first, where gonna go through your closet and pick out a nice
dress for you to wear. Second, i'm going to do your hair and put on
some make-up to let you stand out. And thrid.. I'm gonna ask naruto to
meet me somewhere, BUT, im not gonna be there.. You are" TenTen said
with a smile
" ok.. But how is that gonna 'impress' him" she asked.
" HES GONNA END UP ALONE WITH YOH AND NOTICE HOW GOOD YOU LOOK!" TenTen yelled, frustrated at how clue less Hinata can sometimes be.
"And plus, i'm gonna make him meet you at a restaurant, youll ask him if he would want to sit with you, order something and make conversation.
she explained. As she let out a huge gasp to collect air.
" Are you sure this'll work, TenTen?"
"Ofcourse it will, I though of it!" she said with pride.
She stood up and opened Hinata's closet.. She was shocked at
what Hinata had been hiding in here ...
"…Um, Hinata.."
"Ya.." Hinata answered with shame in her face
"Can you explain to me why you don't own a pair of DRESSES!" she
yelled
"Your the most feminine person I know and all your clothes are baggy and 'ugly'" she said
"Is that some sort of insult?" Hinata asked with a smirk as she
turned her head away
"No... But it's a insult to yourself when you wear things like
this... You know what.. I'm gonna take you shopping at a mall!" she
said with a huge smile.
"Um... Ohh.. I.. Don't have money" she said, as if to make an
excuse not to go out.
"C'mon.. It's a nice day out.. Do it for me.. Do It for your future
'boyfriend'" TenTen said with a wink
"Ok, alright!" Hinata whined.
After hinata dryed her hair and got dress in her 'ugly' clothing,
TenTen dragged her go to the other side of the village to the Konoha
mall.
"What if we run into someone we know.." Hinata asked quietly
"Don't worry about it, Hinata, it's 9am, half of the village is still
asleep"
As they approched the mall, hinata was amazed of how large it was.
"Let me guess.." TenTen said..
"You've NEVER been here, right?"
"How could you tell?" Hinata asked as she opened the entrance door
" I know you more than you think, Hinata. Now c'mon, let's head for
the escalator so we can go to the third floor." TenTen pointed to the excalator.
"Why third floor?" Hinata wondered silently as she steped foot on
the moving steps
"Because that's where well find the, jewlary store, dresses and..." TenTen
paused, and then said,
"I'll save the third store for last.. A surprise" she giggled as
Hinata made a confused face.
"Your full of surprises, aren't you?" Hinata mocked
"I guess so, Oh look! there's the dress place, let's head in!" Hinata slowly
read the name of the store
"Divine Dresses.." she said under her breath
"Yep, I always shop here, all there dresses are soo... DIVINE!" she
laughed out. When they entered inside, they were greeted by a sales person. TenTen told Hinata to search the store for anything that looked "date-able" to wear on a date, while
TenTen looked for the dressing room.
A few mintues later, Hinata and TenTen meet up where they left off and
sat down at a chair.
"Here." TenTen said as she handed Hinata a Hand full of clothing. Most
of them were very short, and colorful, and each have matching pair of
heels"
"All these?" Hinata asked as she tried to count the prices of each
of them.
"Just try them on, and I'll see which one fits you best.. I'll pay,
by the way"
"thanks, TenTen." Hinata smiled as she entered a empty dressing room..
a few minutes later, and a few different dresses, TenTen was amazed
at how Hinata looked in this dress. It was a purplish and lavender
color that went over her knees, tighten around her hips and was
sleeveless.
"You.. Look.. BEAUTIFUL!" TenTen shouted as she stood up to view
Hinata a little closer.
"You know, You have a great body, but it hides under all that baggy
pants and sweaters you wear.
"Shhhhhh! People are looking.." Hinata said as she blushed at how
many people stared at her
"No Hinata, MEN are looking, your more beautiful than you think, you just have
to feel confident in yourself" TenTen said
"Awww, Thanks.. I like it too" she smiled
When they bought the dress, they stopped by the Jewelry store,
Hinata is still anxious to figure out what's the third store their
going to, TenTen still wouldn't tell her until they got to that point.
As they walked in Hinata felt blinded by all they shiny jewelry
that laid in this store.
"Oh look!" Shouted TenTen, it's a crested, diamond necklace with a
butterfly on it.. Isn't it nice!"
"It's beautiful," she gasped as she held it near her neck to see If it
looked nice on her.
"This is it, Im totally gonna get this for you," TenTen pleaded
"Your spending an awful lot of money on me , TenTen" Hinata said.
" No, no, like I said before, I'm your friend and I want to see you
happy.. And I see you at your best when Naruto is with you" she said
with a humble smile.
After they bought the necklace, they walk out, heading
to the third, and last store.. But what was it!
"Hey, Hinata, this is it.. This is the store that sells what you to have to wear AFTER the date.
'After?'
Hinata was hesitant, but slowly turned her head towards the 'surprise'
store TenTen wanted her to go to.
Hinata than counted in her head down to 3 to open her eyes and see
what she's been waiting for
'Three, two, one'
"THE LANGEREY STORE?"
(to be continued)