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It was the first day of term at Hogwarts. Classes were starting and all the 7th years were excited that this was their final year. Harry Potter, Ronald Weasley, and Hermione Granger walked into the potions classroom and took there seats in the back of the class. Everyone was chattering when the door swung open and silence filled the room. Professor Snape walked to his desk and glared at the students.
"I hope that most of you are prepared for this class, as not as the previous years" he said in a frightening voice. "As you all know that I deal harshly with slackers"
He passed around the classes eyeing ever student. As he passed by Hermione though, he couldn't help but stare at her for a couple more seconds. She sure had grown over the summer and had matured quite a lot. Her hair was not as bushy has it use to be, and her hazel eyes sparkled more. He noticed that all the student were looking at him when he turned around and headed for the board
"This is what you shall be doing today" with a flick of his wand the ingredients for a hair removal potion appeared on the board. " I expect a pint of this by the end of the class." he walked back to his desk and began to grade 2nd year assignments.
"It the same ever year" Ron said as he sat back down from getting his materials.
"He expects us to know what we are doing"
"Will after all the years with him I think we should already what we are doing"said Hermione with a smart look at Ron.
Then Harry spoke before this got into an argument "I just hope this year will be different"
By the end of the class, Hermione walked up to Professor Snape's desk and placed the potion next to the rest. As she walked back to her seat Snape looked up for a mere second and watched her sit down. Wow he thought as she was looking at her when she pushed her hair back out of her face. He quickly looked back down at his papers trying to stay focused.I can't believe I am actually thinking this about the- know- it- all- Granger! He thought as he was reading the same line over and over again on the assignment.
I wonder what he was looking at? Did I do something wrong? Hermione was thinking when she noticed Snape looking at her.
At last the bell rang and the students collected their belongings and rushed out of the classroom, not wanting to be the last one out. Hermione grabbed her bag and headed fo the door. Before she exited she looked back and saw Professor Snape grading his paper. She could of sworn she saw him looking up at her. She shook her head and followed Harry and Ron out the door. This is going to be a different year she thought.
I don't think I liked this chapter very much. Please R&R!