Hey this is my first fan fiction so review or dnt I really dnt care.
This is what I think will happen in the Breaking Dawn by Stepheine Meyer.
All of the story shall be in Bella's point of view. P.S I am English so hate using American words like Mom and couch ewwwwwwwwwwwwww!! and I cant really spell I know OK!
The rain was just dribbling down the window the drops sliding down the window pain and leaving a watery path above each one. The sun was also shinning high in the sky making each droplet look like a diamond. The sun shone through the window with streams of gold, yellow and a hint of orange and it hit my on the couch. With a mixture of sun and rain a small rainbow was nestled in-between a few clouds. My feet were numb under the weight of my body, I was sat on them watching the clock tick spending what little time I had left with Charlie, he was making the time slip by slowly but I didn't care I would miss my Dad, him not being able to really cook and his face going purple when I did something he didn't like. The hands on the clock told me it was only one o'clock meaning Alice would be here in about five hours. They had all gone hunting knowing that the boys and Charlie would be out around people all night and Edward having to feed more regularly if he was going to keep his end of our bargain. I had no doubt though that Alice would be round an hour early to change me into the clothes she had left for me to wear tonight. That was something else I was not really looking forward to, my hen night. I would have to be away from Edward while he was on his stag do, and my mother was going to be there, I was sure to get embarrassed and given gifts. Ugh! I was glad thought that telling Charlie and Renee about mine and Edwards engagement was over. It had been three weeks since me and Edward had told Charlie and just under three since we had gone to Jacksonville to tell Renee, she was worse than Charlie. I let myself go back to when we told them remembering the weeks that had past leading to this day a Saturday only seven days till the big day. Ugh!
When Edward and I were in the car travelling home form the meadow to tell Charlie I was so scared. I still wasn't sure how to approach the subject was I meant to walk in the house an go 'Hey Dad Edward and I are going to get married, fancy walking me down the aisle?' No. there really was no clear way to approach it, I just had to be straight with him. The rain was just lightly hammering the windscreen and the heating in the car was turned up full blast to keep me warm, but I still shuddered at the thought of my Dad's face when we told him. In all my worrying and shaking at the though I hadn't noticed that we had pulled up at the house right behind Charlie's cruiser. Edwards gold eyes were searching my face and look worried at what they found there. He slid his hands around my waist and pulled my onto his lap encircling me into his arms. I put my head on his shoulders and let my head be filled with his sweet smell. Edward put a finger under my chin and pulled my face to look at him, his eyes still searching mine.
"Now Bella what are you so scared of?" he question while bringing his lips down to mine. He drew his lips across my jaw and up to my ear. "Come on Bella. Tell me what your scared of?" the slid his lips back along my jaw line and pulled back waiting for my answer. Well I was scared Charlie would try and kill him, and when unsuccessful question what he was. That's what I was scared of. But I couldn't say that.
"Well I don't want him to hurt himself with stress" also true but not why I was really worried although now I had said it, it was added to my fears.
"Bella you know he will be angry but we will talk to him and calm him down. Now tell me what you really are scared of and we can go talk to him" I looked towards the window of the house, I didn't want to tell him this what if he laughed at me? With a heavy sigh I turned back to him and put my head under his chin so he didn't see my blush.
"I don't want..I don't want..." oh just spit it out girl you will feel better when you have said it. "I don't want him to hurt you. And yes Edward before you say anything I know he can't hurt you that's why I'm worried" I was right now I had said it I did feel better. Edward gave a little chuckle just like I knew he would.
"Bella my love please don't worry. We can do this don't to trust my persuasion techniques?" and before I could show my apologies and not intending to offend him, he had swung me out the car bride style and we were at the door.
"Now Bella are you ready?" all I could do was nod and take a big breath, with an exhale the door was open and a chipper looking Charlie was looking at me and Edward with our hands now intertwined.
"Hey Bells, Hey Edward I have ordered pizza if you two want any?" oh shoot I must be back late if he had to order pizza.
"Sorry Dad I didn't mean to be out so late. Ill make it up to you by making Grandmothers special tomorrow?"
"Bella don't be silly I'm a fully grown man, but I wouldn't mind of of Grandma's special stuff" he said this with a little chuckle. I wonder why he was in a good mood. "Any way's I will have to remember how to cook for myself when you go off to collage" Oh yeah he would. I did hate having to lie to Charlie but I couldn't tell him the truth so 'collage' it was. I felt Edward nudge me from the side, I looked up into his eyes and he gave me that mind blowing crooked smile.
"Dad I.. I mean we have have something to tell you" I stated, my voice sound strong and proud odd for the moment that was sure to start and argument.
"Oh. And what would that be" Charlie said eyeing my tummy. God thank heavens it wasn't that. I laughed to myself. Edward tightened his grip on my hand thinking my silence was nerves.
"Now Dad it not what your thinking." I took a big breath preparing myself to shouting. "Now Dad you told me to tell you when I was going to do anything major so you could say your goodbye" I hesitated as I remembered that conversation "Well Dad me and Edward are going to get married" I squeezed my eyes shut and waited for him to explode, but when he didn't instantly go mad I opened and eye to make sure he hadn't passed out or anything. He was just stood there thinking over what I had just said. He didn't look mad or angry, he didn't even look pale, just thoughtful. Then he exhaled and stared right at me.
"And your sure this is what you want?" after he had finished he looked right at Edward, I answered to quickly for him to deny my sincerity.
"Yes. This is what I want" I stressed the I making sure he understood that it really was.
"Well then Bella Thank you. Thank you both for coming and telling me and not just running of and doing it." I couldn't deny that he did look happy that we hadn't done that "But I do have a favour to ask?"
"Anything" I thought for a bite after I had just promised to do anything, it always seamed I spook too quickly.
"Will you let me give you away?" I was so glad that's what he wanted. I ran up to him and wrapped my arms around his neck and kissed him on the cheek.
"Oh Dad thank you!" I was so happy he wasn't mad, well didn't let it show that he was angry.
"Well congratulations Edward she will be all yours soon I guess. Can I ask when the bog day will be?" Edward stepped forward to shake Charlie's hand as he wished us good luck.
"The thirteenth of August" Charlie looked shocked but tried to hide it.
"That soon, well good luck. Oh and Bella I think you should go tell Renee to her face"
"Dad I couldn't agree more" and that was that. Charlie was dealt with. Now it was just my mother.
We had planned to go to see Renee the same week we told Charlie. When we got to Jacksonville Renee had hugged us both, welcoming us and telling us how she had missed us and that we should come by more often. Renee and Phil's response had been the same as Charlie's only a little more questioning. Asking if this was what we really wanted? And if we were ready for a commitment like this? But in the end was convinced that it was and that we were and just as Charlie had done wished us luck.
With the parents done it was just people at school but I wonted to wait to tell the with the invitations. Alice had been busy ever since we had decided to get married making arrangements for the wedding. When we came back from Jacksonville she had the invitations in hand ready to show me. When we got through the door after hugging us both she pulled me into her arms and run up the stairs with me in arms. She steamed into her room were a startled Jasper said Hey and sat up on their bed to watch over Alice and keep me calm. After a while Edward appeared at the door and came and sat on the bed next to Jasper. Edward opened his arms and called me to come and sit on his lap while Alice got what she wanted to show us. She brought out a very large brow box, I was a little over whelmed at the size and gasped at the thought of what might be in it.
"Well Bella.. Edward these are you invitations" Alice said this sliding the box over towards me and Edward. As Edward slid the box opened around me I once again gasped at the amount of invitations. The were of coarse lovely. They were on a cream card with a simple red rose bent over each corner on opposites sides.
"Alice how many are there?" I asked not expecting a straight answerer. I was right/
"Well I wasn't sure how many people you wanted to invite. And I thought what s left we can keep for next time" I thought about that for a while. If I was going to be changed she was right, we would be doing this again.
"You cant have done that much since we left. How have you sorted a church and the guest" I was getting angry now I told her I wonted veto on that.
"Their not filled silly. The calligrapher is coming on Tuesday. So you best start the guest list and we are going to look at churches tomorrow." she added the last bit in quickly.
"Well I guess I ate something bad on the plane and I feel a little sick" I pretended to look pale and faint in Edwards arms, Alice and Jasper giggled, Edward just sighed.
"Really don't take acting as a career love" we all laughed at that.
The next day we looked at churches, well Alice looked me and Edward just looked into each others eyes, not paying any attention. When we pulled up to a small church in Port Angeles, I took in a sharp breath. It was small but beautiful. It had little stain glass windows in arched shapes. There was a small but wide gravel drive and it was surrounded by trees.
"Well I guess we have found the church" Alice stated. Inside was just as beautiful, and it wasn't to large. The alter was surrounded by and arch of carved roses and had few rows. Alice arranged it so we could have the church on the thirteenth of August. As we went home Alice was demanding I finish a list of who was coming and suggested she came round and help me finish. The list was sorted for when the calligrapher came round to do the invitations. The only other thing I remember about the planning was the cake. Because of their utter distaste for food I had to do the tasting. The guest list was small so we chose to have only a three layer cake, but Alice being Alice made me chose a different flavour for every layer. I could make up my mind, although I was full I was still undecided. The caterer was getting board but had to keep up the enthusiasm because of what we were paying for such services. I chose to have a basic top layer and a simple jam and butter cream was my favourite, the other I went a little more extravagant. I had a chocolate and fudge filling for the second layer and for the third a strawberry drizzle and champaign filing, Edward had been eyeing through the whole process. Although the cake tasting ordeal had been some filling in too many ways, it was nice to take my mind of that day at school. That day we had told our friends at school and given them their invites. They had all been very shocked and very congratulatory. They were all excited and so happy about the whole thing, I just wished I could have felt the same. I was far to nervous to be excited. We had waited till the last day of the year to give every one their invites so that I didn't suffer too much in the last week.
I was pulled out of my flashbacks when Charlie's voice entered my head.
"Bella did you hear what I said" he sounded a little upset that I hadn't been paying attention
"Sorry Dad I was reminiscing about the planning. What did you say?"
"I said are you excited about tonight? Renee will be coming down from the hotel at four she has asked me if she can come here and change with you" I sighed Renee was staying in a local hotel this week for the hen party and to help Alice this the last few bits. Phil was coming down closer to the day, and when I say closer he was coming down this Thursday and the wedding was on Friday.
"Well that sounds nice, I'm sure Alice will be coming down to help be get dressed" I should say coming down to dress me.
"Well you three can have a nice girlie chat while you get ready"
"Yeah Im sure we will" in fact I think it would be more like 'Bella don't be a baby tonight with your gifts, you know you want them really' with Renee reassuring Alice I had always been like that and them laughing at my expense.
"Well you have fun to Dad. Oh and Dad please be nice to Edward and his family they will be yours to soon" Charlie just sighed and turned and looked at me.
"Sure Suer Bella whatever you say" and he went back to the T.V.
So there's my first chapter what did you think? I do hate it when people are always like I will update when I get reviews nag nag nag. Review if you wont I will update when I can. You can even stae mistakes if you wont. Lol