"This is my first fanfic and story I have every written and would much appreciate any help with grammer and spelling."

Zero lay there his right arm broken in several places and unable to open his left eye. He took in a breath and could taste the smoke that was floating all around him.

He could feel the blood that was running down from the cut his left eye, and several other cuts on his face. He could hear swords clashing from behind him wich forced him

to open his right eye and jerked up, but when he did this a large sharp pain came from his right arm causing him to call out in pain. After the pain died down he looked

around all his friends, family, and other people he knew were lying around him some in pieces and others in large piles. All he could smell was smoke and blood as he look

around what used to be his neighborhood. He heard the swords clashing again and which shortly after Zero had gotten up and ran away from the horrible sound, but as he

ran he couldn't help but look back at what used to be his home were he, his family, and friends lived and grew up. The site he saw was one he thought was impossible

there were two people floating in the air fighting with swords. One of them was wearing a white cloak and had orange hair, and the other was a man also wearing white the

only differance was the man had pink hair, and instead of a sword he had a large pole-arm wepon. Each time their wepons met Zero was almost knocked over, but not only

that Zero felt as if he was being crushed by the air around him and was uneasy. Just when he thought it couldn't get any weirder the man with pink hair shot out a large

white beam out of his hand the man with orange hair barely dogging the attack. Then he countered with a black beam that seemed to come out of his sword which the pink

haired man deflected with is hand. Right then and there Zero relized that he must be dreaming and was asleep in his bed, and that all his friends and family were ok and

still alive. He sat there with his eye closed trying to wake himself up, but he didn't wake up and the pain in his left eye intensified. This caused him to open his other eye,

and saw to his horror a large amount of monsters coming out of what seemed like no were, and the worst part was they were coming for him. At this site he turned and ran

as fast as he could being careful of his arm and ran in the opposite direction into town. He ran past his highschool wich was in flames and yet more bodies were stack or

lacking body parts, he ran past one of his friends neighborhoods which like his was distroyed. Zero turned his head to see the monsters still chasing him and were gainging

very quickly, so Zero ran as fast as he could which was a big mistake in his part, because he tripped and fell right in the middle of the bridge where Zero had gotten his first

kiss. Zero turned to see the monsters far to close to him for him to run and get away, so he closed his right eye, started to cry, and waited to die. The monsters finally

around Zero started to taunt him before they killed him. One of the creatures called him a crybaby and pathetic, while another one started to like the blood off his arm

saying how delicious it was. Zero started to get angry but this only made him cry harder, but right before one of the hidious creatures could utter another word a large group

of men and women wearing black robes and swords at hand attacked the ugly creatures, and what seemed like an eternity killed them. Zero opened his eye to see the

group approach him before all the strength in him faded and he fainted.