This is my first yaoi so I want comments saying if its good or not.

Man he just looks so good and I just want to rip all of his clothes off and…..and…..I.

"ummm light are you ok" said L

"uh yer what is it L" I said while turning a bit red in the face.

Dammit dammit dammit, why do I do this, all the fricken time when ever I see him, even if he's just sitting there I want to fucken jump him right there and then.

"it's just that you look a bit red" said L while cocking his head to the side.

"oh no, I'm just fine" I said while trying not to look at L straight in the face.

Just then my dad walked in and then my face turned redder than before.

"ummm hey dad what are you doing here? I thought you were at home with mum and sayu"I said while trying get dad to go home.

"well ryuzaki called me in and said that you didn't look well and now that I look at you I think ryuzaki was right" my dad said as he took a good look at my face.

"yes light if you want to go up stairs I can take you up there, seeing as we can't leave each other site anyway" L said as he lifted the handcuffs.

Then I started to turn bright red. Omg what do I say, like omg of course I want to go up stairs with L but, wait that's not what he meant no…no he was just looking at my face and thought that I didn't look well like there's nothing between me and L, like I don't even like him in that way….but I do want him, I mean I want to go up stairs.

"ummm yes I want to go up there right now, I mean no I can't, I mean…ummm yes lets go now, RIGHT NOW L" I was starting to lose it but then L got up a started dragging me up stairs by the chain.

"come on light lets go, you don't look well at all" L said we got to the top of the steps.

When we got up stairs I sat on the bed and L sat on the chair next to the bed.

Please give me comments and tell me if you liked or disliked it and if there is any thing I can improve on pretty pleassseeeeeeee tell me