Hey, I've read a few stories like this before, and I decided to try my hand at it. btw this is only the trailer. I decided to try this instead of a summary. The sad thing, though, is that I can totally picture this.
Narrator
quote
(scene)
Action (special effects)(sort of)
When she was 16, Mitchie Torres...
(Mitchie blows out candles on a cake while her friends sing happy birthday)
...Disappeared
birthday scene freezes and turns to black and white
She left no note or explanation
Mitchie's mom: Where is my daughter? Where is Mitchie?
Police Officer: I promise, Ma'am, we're doing everything we can to find her.
She just vanished
(Shane sitting in hir room alone, looking at the stars)
People began to give up hope that she would come back
Nate: Why can't you just accept the fact that she's probably not going to come back?
Shane: Because she will!
Nate: No! She won't!
They assumed she was dead
(Mitchie's memorial)
Except for one boy
(Shane is at a lake)
Shane:(whispering) I know you're out there, Mitch. Please come back.
Fade to black
Ten years later...
(Older Shane is walking down the street when he walks into someone)
...She's back
Black
Shane: Mitchie?
Dramatic music
A story about
Friendship
(Caitlyn and Mitchie sitting on a bed and laughing)
Hate
(Man throwing Mitchie to the ground)
Betrayal
Man: How could you?
Mitchie: I didn't do anything
Man: Liar!
Family
Mitchie: Mom!
And finding love again
(Shane slipping a ring onto Mitchie's finger)
Black
Home
Written and produced by still waiting for my prince
So... what did you think? Good? Horrible? Somewhere in between? Review plz!