Welcome to my story, dear reader: I hope you enjoy this experience!
I would like to ask you to, instead of reviewing with the usual compliment (though those are always welcome!), point out whatever you think I should change in order to improve the story. This includes, but is not limited to:
- Punctuation
- Dialogue
- Expressions and idioms
- Verbs
- Adjectives
- Names and pronouns
- Everything I could have done but didn't
- This freaking header, even!
If I agree with you, the passage shall be changed in the story and you will get a shoutout in the very same chapter, as well as my deepest gratitude.
Anyway, thank you for giving this story a chance. I hope you like it!
I would like to give a shoutout to:
- Umbruhon: Thank you, dear reader!