This is my first fan fiction story so please don't be too harsh. I like constructive criticism but don't go too far. Thanks, I hope you like it.
Chapter One: Attack
BELLA POV
I was on my way home from work, when I got this really strange feeling that I was being fallowed. I looked in my rearview mirror and there was nobody within my view. I went to go look back at the road ahead of me and there was a silver Volvo only a foot away from my front bumper.
Of course I screamed. It wasn't there ten seconds ago. I looked at the Volvo's rearview mirror and noticed two, coal, black, eyes stalking me. I froze in shock. Then, I realized that I should not be shocked or scared by someone staring in my direction. But I couldn't help being scared. The driver held up one hand and motioned for me to follow him.
Of course I followed because I'm the biggest chicken on earth, even if I don't show it.
He slowed to a stop at the end of a road. I realized that I had absolutely no idea where we were. All of the sudden the door of my truck was ripped off and I was yanked from the driver's seat. My arm was definitely dislocated from my shoulder. I was thrown against the ground. Hard.
Something was pinning me against the ground. I felt a sharp pain in my left shoulder. I screamed a piercing scream. The person on top of my just kept whispering something in my ear that I couldn't quite hear because I was screaming so loudly. When he picked me up and put me in the back of his car I was crying.
I noticed that he was a she. She kept telling me, "I'm sorry. It'll be ok. I'm sorry." After about fifteen minutes of screaming, she turned and was trying to put a needle in my vein.
I gained enough strength to stop screaming in pain and ask, "What are you doing to me?!?!"
"I'm trying to help you with the pain! So, please, stop moving for one second!"
I went still instantly. By still I mean that I stopped trying to get her not to touch me. I was still shaking in pain. After she got the needle into my arm and managed to put some weird looking liquid into my arm, I was out cold. The last thing I remember was that she started the car finally and started to drive away from my truck which was still on the last section of pavement.
Sorry I know it's short but I promise I have more coming. Review please it will make me become more motivated. Some ideas to help me decide what to write about next wouldn't hurt. Who knows maybe i'll use parts of your ideas. So please review!