Hi! It's me, I haven't been on this part of fanfiction for a while (I was drawn in by Starbound), but I'm back and hopefully with better writing skills than whenI left. Now this story is literally me, rewriting all of Rio 3. That's right, all 28,360 words are going to be changed or edited in some way. Now the reason I am doing this? Rio 3 was, a horrorfest to say the least. My complete lack of writing skills made it at times so cringe-worthy that even I can't read the whole thing. Some of you guys liked it (I hope) but most didn't.
And besides the lack of actual talent for writing that I had, even at times where the story actually was good, it was difficult to understand. And I don't mean the use of broken English or where the words don't make sense, but everything was so bunched together that it made everything difficult to read. Here's an example. (Whoop-de-doo!)
"Rio 3, a prediction of the movie
Blu had awoken to a start. A loud crash noise could be heard outside if his nest followed by screaming from what sounds like a crossover between a chicken getting hit by a truck or a rat getting sprayed in the face with pepper spray. Blu walked over to the entrance of his hollow, Jewel and the kids had went to stay by Eduardo's hollow to spend time with him and he had the entire hollow to himself. "Please you're making too much noise " said half awake in no general direction. He saw a macaw lying on his tree trunk rubbing his sore head. "jeez, maybe if you put your hollow in a different place you wouldn't have gotten awoken" the bird said with absolutely no hint of sarcasm in his voice. Blu finally realizing the situation (since he had been half asleep for pretty much the entire experience) flew down to make sure this guy was all right. "are you okay" Blu asked, "yeah I'm fine" the bird said. Upon observing the bird Blu realized that the bird was about the same height as him and had the same neck ruffle of feathers as he had, and the three feathers on the top of his head. Realizing he looked almost exactly like him. Except this bird was green with red circles around his eyes.
See what I mean? At times, when chapters exceeded over 1k words, my story ended up looking like an entire colony of ants were put on a blank sheet of paper, and then smashed with a hammer. It was a slugfest and in the worst of ways. So in order to redeem myself as a writer that is worthy of being able to post stories on this site, I will re-write the ENTIRE STORY (I am not looking forward to it).
What will be different? Well, I'm going to warn you before you read this story. The plot is going to be changed, almost completely. Blu is still going to be lost thousands of miles away from home with no clear way back, that's will remain the same. But a lot of characters from the old story, are going to get the axe. A lot of events from the old story are going away too. And the plot will be radically different. It's still going to be primarily humorous (I mean it wouldn't be a story from me if it wasn't funny in some way) but it isn't going to be as, how do I say it?
Weird I guess?
I don't have a written plan for this story. I'm just going to write as ideas come along, so this story might be better than Rio 3 or it might be worst, I don't know.
ALSO THANKS FOR 5K VIEWS ON RIO 3. AMAZING.
So, without further delay, I present to you, (oh boy) Rio 3: Remastered. Hope you enjoy.