Chapter 1 of The Disney Waters

Its been one week since I got out of school. Being a

Freshmen or as sophmores like to say fresh meat can be

kind of hard. You see I have never been the popular person

and everyone hated me but i have the most wonderful

friends ever. My best friend sydney sticks with me through

thick and thin no mater what happens like four months ago

my boyfriend dumped me she was there. We will always be

friends forever.

My mom yelling to me had brought me out of my

thoughts "Haley its dinner time come eat!"."Coming

mom!"Oh yay she made spagetti. I got me some food and

sat down at the table "Mommy daddy?"I tried to sweet talk

to ask my parents about the Disney teen cruise."Yea''.''can i

please sign up for the Disney cruise please, please, please,

please, please, please, please, please''. ''Alright fine just

be quiet''

"Awesome thanks!"

-Two Days Later-

"Mom im going on the cruse i won!''. ''Thats

amazing Haley ,well what are you wating for go pack'' Oh

My Gosh I cant believe im going o a cruise. OK so i will be

gone for four months so i will need lot of clothes. I need to

pack my laptop. And my swimsuit OH I CANT WAIT.

Well this was my first story

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