This is my first attempt at poetry in Middle Earth. Please read and review. Sorry for the lack of updates on other stories, but I got ill then my school started summative season.
a land of stars stones and hope
blood of kings and deathless men
repent revenge end the reign
he who stands alone stands here
our ancestral home was once near
tall strong proud old
age bends all even elves
grace the halls of old once more
feel the pain of a thousand men
see who you could have been
lifes dark broken cries
sister-son brother-mine
heir to the throne of life
line of deathless kings
mountain soul-arkenstone
pale gold enchanted ring
bring back my home to me
I see fire burning my home
the dwarves beyond refuse my pleas
dwarves of erebor unite
descendants of moria repent
far over the misty moutains cold
to dugeons deep and caverns old