For those of you who know me from my DeviantART account (which is still the same screen name as it is in this website), then you already know what's going on there (sort of). For those of you who don't, let me tell you that I have begun the re-write for "Fury of Lincoln Loud." It is NO LONGER a based on a Regular Show episode, "Think Positive." It will be it's own original story (in some way, but not 'entirely') and it's in multiple chapters... Even though there are only two chapters out so far.
Of course, only two chapters are out so far AND it does indeed start off as a RESPONSE to the infamous episode "No Such Luck," and I apologize for that. Please don't make a fuss over it, because it is going to be (and it should be) a response to a lot of what I believe are "bad Loud House episodes." I do have a plan for how it's going to go out in the "turning point" (or to be more politically correct, the "climax"), as well as how it will end. However, I do happen to have a life outside the internet and it should be obvious that I can't exactly update this every once in a while. Unfortunately I don't have an update schedule for the rewrite. Sorry. If you want to get a head start on it, just go search "BloodKirbyUnleashed" on DeviantART and you should be able to find the story from there.
Also, this story is being renamed "The Wrath of Lincoln Loud." Not exactly a creative way of changing the title or something, but I was mostly interested in rewriting the story itself than trying to be snarky and/or creative with the title. I'm still open to criticism BTW. Just because one or two people (or possibly more) disliked my first story and may have brutalized me about it in some way, I ain't stopping anytime soon. If anything, the way one of them criticized me did kind make me realize what I did wrong in more ways than one (yeah I know I defended myself like a dumb nut, but I had a change of heart somewhat). Good or bad, I'll take all the genuine criticism like a real person, and not like some moronic ass-hat who can't make good movies for crap and then go at content creators for saying stuffs he didn't like and then making it into a MAJOR SHIT STORM... Okay I went off on a bit of a tangent. My bad.
But yeah. You guys are still free to tell me what to do and what NOT to do. "The Wrath of Lincoln Loud" is still young and I haven't gotten quite far with it yet so feel free to throw in some things as to what I could do to improve the aforementioned story. Not "Fury of Lincoln Loud," because by this point that story is not really relevant anymore. I mean you can still read it and then brutalize me and/or praise me for it if you want. The important thing is that I started the "The Wrath of Lincoln Loud" and I can kind of guarantee that it WILL be better than "Fury of Lincoln Loud."
Also, to avoid confusion, I won't be taking requests for the rewrite. I'll take criticism and/or suggestions to make changes/improvements, but story requests for the aforementioned story (wow I'm starting to sound redundant. LOL) are something else that I don't really need. AND OF COURSE, the rewrite will be on DeviantART first. When it's finished, I'll post the "complete" version of it here.
This is BloodKirbyUnleashed, and I'll be out of your hair now.
Ciao.
