Harry Potter and the Unexpected Heir

I realised that my last version was not at all detailed, so now that I'm older, my imagination is even better not to mention my writing capabilities I have decided to start writing again, if you are interested in Grey's Anatomy check out my other story Months and Love which has just been finished. ;) hope you like my rewritings. Don't forget to review

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It's approaching midnight on the 30th July at Privet Drive, not a single person could be seen on the street. A young woman walked up to door with the number 4 on it. She rang the bell and heard complaints coming from the inside; smiling to herself she waited for someone to open the door.

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Mr. Dursley was just ready to send everyone to bed, Petunia had finished her nightly sterilisation of the kitchen, Dudley was seating on the sofa with his PSP in his hand, he sat watching the news, more deaths he thought, people leaving their gas boilers on, electric shocks what is going on in this world? He was about to open his mouth when he heard the bell go.

"Who the blazes is it calling at this time of night? Have they no manners?" he got up and opened the door, in front of him was a young woman, no older that 20, she had mahogany coloured hair and a blue dress that went to her knees and was made of delicate fabric which clung to her advanced womanly features. Her summer sky blue eyes looked at him and her face expressed a warm smile.

"Hello you must be Mr. Dursley, I'm Lillian and I wonder if you have a moment, I would like to speak with you and Mr. Harry Potter if possible" the woman said

Mr. Dursley just stood there with his mouth hanging open, he had never seen someone as beautiful as her, he quickly nodded his head and led her into the living room. Petunia saw they had guests and started to make tea right away. Dudley like his father had his mouth hanging open too. She sat down and waited for Mr. Dudley to do the same.

"So what exactly do you want with my nephew, I don't think someone like you is interested in him, his mentally disable doesn't interest anybody." Dursley said, trying to divert attention away from Harry.

"On the contrary Mr. Dursley he is very interesting and I am here to talk to him, no will you call him or shall I?" Lillian offered

Dursley rolled his eyes in defeat and called Harry down.

Harry Potter had been laying on his bed reading his happy birthday cards that arrived a while ago from Ron and Hermione. He couldn't believe it, he was 17, he was lucky in a way he had faced Voldermort at least 5 times already and his still alive, not many can do that, but then again he had to live in this house until now, he had to grow up without parents and in a family that did not care about him. 'I will defeat Voldermort and make you proud mum and dad' he thought if he was soon turning 17 the protection would disappear, why hadn't anyone come to get him? It was then that he heard his name being called from downstairs 'odd they never call me at this time of night' he was thinking of ignoring it then he heard his name a second time, 'better be important' he said out loud he reluctantly got up and went downstairs.

He got to the living room and was surprised to see the new guest he was just as intrigued by her beauty as the Dursleys had. He saw Petunia go and fetch the tea. He waited for someone to talk. He didn't wait long. The visitor got up and shook his hand.

"Mr Potter nice to meet, I'm Lillian I'm here to escort you to Grimmauld Place"

She sat back down and patted the seat next to her, he sat down, Petunia put the tea down and sat next to Vernon, served the tea and sat back waiting for Lilian to continue.

"Harry as you know the ancient enchantment that protects you stops working the second you turn 17 so for you protection and yours relatives protection I'm here to take you to safety, powerful magical charms and spells will be set on the house for their protection" she said nodding at the Dursleys "so we are on a tight schedule so we must be off, can you go and get your things as quickly as possible please"

Harry went upstairs he had everything ready as he suspected that someone might come and retrieve him from Privet Drive, he made his way downstairs and was faced with a different situation then when he left.

Lillian had been drinking tea when Dursley accidentally touched her arm and her tea spilled all over her dress, the Dursleys were looking furiously at their son for doing something like that to such an elegant visitor.

"I'm sorry, can I help you clean it up, we can go to my room it you want" he said leaning towards her. She looked at him top to bottom and rolled her eyes, Petunia was trying to clean the stain with a damp cloth Lillian told her that it was fine. At that moment Harry walked into the room he saw the stain and took out his wand to dry it, Lillian stopped him.

"It's a bit hot but it's ok, you still have the trace on you and besides I have my own"

She took out her wand and tried to dry the stain, it didn't come off so she closed her eyes and her blue dress morphed into white witches robe. The Dursley were for the second time like that night with their mouth open.

"I though… I thought…" Vernon stuttered

"That I was a muggle? No I'm a witch, so Harry we better be off, do you want to say goodbye to your relatives?" Harry shook his head "Thought so, Penna?" A Phoenix appeared magnificently in the middle of the room, this was the first time in history that muggles had seen a phoenix in the last 1000 years and the Dursley were dumbstruck, "Grimmauld Place please" Lillian said, she, Harry and his belonging were engulfed in warm flames and disappeared, leaving Privet Drive behind forever.

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So how was that? I will delete the rest of the story so that people will not peak into the beyond, I don't know when the next chapter will be up but it shouldn't take too long.

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Vanessa