Harry Potter and his world do not belong to me

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This is a story set after the war. Harry, Ron and Hermione set of for Hogwarts one last time.

It was the first week of summer and the sun shone brightly from the sky, the Weasleys, Harry and Hermione sat in front of the Burrow sunning themselves.

Mrs Weasley sat on a sun lounger with the Daily Prophet in her hands, suddenly she gasped/

"Ohh look at this:" she began.

"Professor Minerva McGonagall, newly appointed headmistress of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry has made an official statement announcing that all students who attended school or was not able to attend Hogwarts last year shall repeat the previous year as studies were interrupted by the takeover. She has also announced that students who were to finish their schooling before the summer for good are being asked to return to complete their seventh year. This is not going to mean that there will be no new first year students this year, those who are set to go to Hogwarts this year will still be able to attend." She paused to catch her breath before going on, " This means you will be able to go back and get your newts!" she smiled. Mrs Weasley had been disappointed that they were not able to finish their schooling.

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Harry having been thrilled to hear he was able to go back to Hogwarts as a student again, (and glad to know that this time there would be nobody after him) was overjoyed to find himself once again with the Quiddich Captaincy and surprised to see the head boy badge in his envelope. Hermione was to be head girl and Ron was perfectly happy to see that he didn't have those responsibilities.

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