I deleted the original and revised. Hopefully this one will be better.

Disclaimer: Don't own Twilight or any of the amazing characters.

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Aly, Mack, and Sophie sat at their usual spot at SmackNelley's on Sycamore Cove Beach in sunny Cali. They talked about the usual; hot guys, best friends, school, and each other. Of course, when speaking of hot guys, the Cullen's are always mentioned. How could you not think about their perfect bodies, charming personalities, and perfect faces?

The sound of waves crashing into shore and distant laughters echoed around the famous restaurant. Nothing's better than a lazy sunday afternoon at your favorite lunch spot.

"I really wish he would just talk to me. Just one sentence. At least one word." Mack continued. "I mean, he's perfect. Absolutely gorgeous.."

"Agreed," Aly chimed in. "But we all know Edward is the best. Jasper is always so quiet, you never know whether he's plotting to take over the world or just thinking about what he's gonna have for lunch." She said with a sip of her fruit smoothie.

"I know, but I find that really interesting. He's full of surprises." Mack said staring out into the sea. With a sigh she looked over at Sophie. "Here comes your man."

Sophie had been fiddling with her chocolate cake when Mack mentioned Chad. She looked up slowly and turned to face him.

"Hey love, water's amazing. You sure you don't want to come in?" Chad asked with a grin. He sat in a chair next to Sophie and put his arm behind her back. She leaned into his wet shoulder and smiled up at him.

"I'll pass for now." she said with a giggle. Mack and Aly looked at each other and started laughing. They got up to go for a swim as Aly said, "We'll leave you two alone for a bit." With another giggle, and Mack laughing behind her, they walked down to the water.

Chad looked down at Sophie and went in for a kiss. She happily kissed him back. Sophie was the only one of the three BOFTCEE's to have had a boyfriend this year; and it's already July. She felt perfectly content in his strong arms.

Mack and Aly slowly walked into the waves, occasionally picking up a pretty sea shell.

"Gahh, Sophie's so lucky!" Aly exclaimed, throwing her hands in the air. "You can tell it's real love, I mean, just look at them!" She turned pointedly in their direction.

"Yep, and Chad's so sweet." Mack added, "No worries though, we'll find the right guys for us....eventually."

"Haha, I already have a guy in mind," The conversation continued, when without warning, Toby jumped them from the side. Toby was Aly's best friend, they've known each other longer than they could remember. He kinda had his own little group, just like Aly's, except it consists of guys; Chad, Toby, and Jay, they all knew each other pretty well.

"Heeeey girls," He said with a huge smile. His best friend Jay sneaked up from the other side, randomly picked Mack up, and threw her over his shoulder. With a shriek Mack started laughing before she could yell at him. Jay jogged down the water line past a group playing volleyball, an ice cream stand, some surfboards, and then ran up to a huge drift wood log surrounded by trees, while laughing the whole time. He slowly let the still giggling Mack down onto the log. Jay let out his breath with a woosh before sitting down facing her, still smiling.

"Mack, I have a question," he said after a moment's hesitation. He nervously watched her reaction.

After regaining herself, "Shoot," she said with a gentle smile.

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Toby and Aly were walking along the shore talking about random stuff when Toby suddenly asked, "What exactly do you think of me?" Aly stopped short. She didn't expect that. She quickly rand through her thoughts thinking of smart replies, honest replies, or if she wanted to play hard to get.

"Well..?"

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