Okays this is the second story i have written and i know its not perfect but please be nice in you reviews, please tell me what i can do to make my writing better but be friendly about it :)
xx emoss
JPOV
Me and Alice were laying down on our bed, I was looking straight at her beautiful face while she traced all the scares on my body.
Suddenly she went blank, I could tell she was having a vision because all of her emotions were be sucked right out.
Alice open her eyes again and her happiness returned, she sat up and looked straight at me.
"Bella's getting pretty good at the vampire thing, i just saw her take down a few grizzlies, Emmett will be so proud of her" Alice said, smiling showing her pearl white teeth.
Alice went blank again, sometimes i think its cute when she has visions but other times it gets pretty annoying .Alice's eyes flashed back open.
"oh, just what we need"she said with an annoyed tone.
Just as I was about to ask I heard some giggling and strange noises coming from Emmett and Rosalie's room, sometimes this Vampire hearing thing can be a pain.
"They can't even be quiet, I mean Nessie is just down stairs" I said, thinking about Nessie's face when she hears them.
Alice leaned down onto my chest her lips so close to mine, I stroked one cheek from ear to chin, just I was about to crush my lips into hers when I hear little feet at our bedroom door. Alice must have heard to because she jumped of the bed and opened the door to reveal the one and only Nessie.
"Uncle jazz, Aunty Alice i was wondering, what are uncle Emmy and rose doing in there"Nessie said barley even a whisper.
Alice and I just looked at each other and cracked up laughing.