Quick story for my creative writing class. PLZ Review.

Disclaimer: I do not own the boondocks.

Huey

"… it's amazing how the world can change so quickly. The world we live in is so lazy. The simple task of meeting someone new is dumbed down. All you do is sit and talk to any random person on damn facebook. This is why I don't have one. As I was sayin-"

"YOU DON'T HAVE A FACEBOOK?" Jazmine yells out disrupting my report on current social standards.

"No. Why would you think I would have one? It's such a waste if time." I explain

"You just sayin that cuz your boring ass ain't got no friends." Cindy says then continued by chuckling.

"If did have a facebook, which I won't, I would have way more friends than you at least." I say as a comeback.

"Wanna put some money on that?" she asks.

"I wouldn't want to take it from you so easily, but since you insisted fine. What are the rules?" I ask accepting the challenge.

"You got two weeks to get 156 friends on facebook. They have to be from woodcrest and you can't add randomly. If you win I'll kiss you…just fukin witchu. If I win…you gotta kiss Jazmine. Deal?"

"Fine, I already got some from my brothas and sistas club." I say showing off.

"Aren't you, me, and Caesar the only one's in that club." Jazmine interrupts still blushing from the past comment.

"…Shut up." I mumble.

"It's true man. I don't think it's such a good idea to make this bet." Caesar says. "You're not the most social person in the world ya know."

"Whatever. How hard can it be to make friends on facebook." I say.

5 Hours later

"What the fuck is this! Why hasn't anyone accepted my friend requests?" I scream in anger.

"Well…..at least you still have me." Jazmine tells me.

"If that doesn't help me get facebook friends, then I really don't care." I say.

"You know what Huey, ever since you made that damn bet with Cindy, you've been pretty much oblivious to the rest of the world. That's why I deleted my facebook."

"Oh yea. About that, can you make another one and friend request me?" I say.

"…Forget it. I'm gonna go to the hill if you want a real friend."

Jazmine

I storm out of Huey's room, grab a piece of loose paper and I go to the hill. On the way there I see two people talking and it reminds me of Huey's report the other day.

it's amazing how the world can change so quickly. The world we live in is so lazy. The simple task of meeting someone new is dumbed down. All you do is sit and talk to any random person on damn facebook.

… it's amazing how the one who wrote that can get sucked into it just as easy as the ones he look down upon once before.

I reach the hill, take the paper, and begin to write

Facebook, all it did is that it took

It just took my heart and shook

All it did was make him give me dirty looks

It's supposed to be the social network

Then why is it turning my eyes into wet work

Every one is breaking, it is just soul taking

They say its life changing, then why is my heart sounding like leaves raking

They don't know what it's truly making

A life is what it's faking, it's like baby shaking

Okay that's a bit dark, but not as dark as this mark

That it has left on my heart, it has just been torn apart

This is unfair just like wal-mart

Huh, that's something you'll say

But ever since that day, all you did was push me away

Tryna get me to move to the U.K, but I will always stay

I'll be by your side, even when you try to hide

You I will always find, even when you sleep

I'll be on your mind, and you'll be on mine

In my eyes, when I look up in skies

You are the star that brightest shines

All of the sudden I see Huey walking up the hill caught up in his presence, he gabs the paper.

"You wrote this?

"…yes."

He then leans in and kisses me gently on the lips. When he breaks it he leans back

"I guess I lost…"

YAAAAAAY. He lost. PLZ REVIEW?...?