AUTHORS NOTE- OK HI PEOPLE! I HOPE YOU HAVE LIKED MY OTHER FANFICTIONS. (PLEASE FORGIVE ME FOR MY FIRST ONE THE CHRISTMAS SURPRISE AND A BUNCH OF CRAZYS, I UP-LOADED A EDITED VERSION, FIRST UPLOAD WAS COMPLETE MISTAKE! OK THIS IS A COMEDY FANFIC WHERE JIM, AMELIA, DELBERT, SARAH, AND NATALIE WERE MENT TO GO ON A NORMAL VACATION TO A TROPICAL PLANET…. THEN ENGINE PROBLEMS! COMEDY. WHAT WILL HAPPEN? CONSTRUCTIVE CRTISIAM IS WELCOMED, NO FLAMES PLEASE. ENJOY! (the main part of the story will take a bit to get to maybe, I am descriptive sometimes.)
Me- "hey treasure planet people!"
Tp- "what?"
Me- "I created you!"
Tp- "wooohoooo!"
Me- "just kidding Disney owns you, and created you."
Tp- "dang it!"
(kidding nothing against you Disney!….. Please don't sue.) and I own nothing but Natalie and some fake names and charaters (Natalie is Amelia's niece she has coal black curly hair and navy blue eyes and a small black tail and Amelia is 5'11 in my version)
Two words, ROAD TRIP!
It was a warm, lazy day on the small mining planet of montresser. A light breeze was sweeping through the Doppler back yard. Amelia, and Delbert were lying in a hammock, Reading a old copy of Dr. Jackal and Mr. Hyde. Slowly rocking themselves back, and forth. Murmuring the words as they read, Natalie sat in the grass lazily making a daisy chain. Jim was sleeping face down on the grass next to her. And Sarah was leaning up against one of the trees that held Amelia, And Delbert's hammock, sleeping. Natalie finished her daisy chain, placing it upon Jims head and sighing she threw her head in the air.
"I'm-so-BOARED!" she complained.
Jim snorted, and Amelia shifted her body weight and glanced at Delbert. Who looked back, they both were thinking the same thing.
"damn, your right!"
Amelia said setting down the book, and clasping her hands over her stomach. Jim had woken up. He spit out a mouthful of grass and looked at his mom. Who was now snoring, then looked at the hose coiled up next to the house.
"I got an idea!" he said standing up.
"and just what is that idea James?"
Amelia asked sitting up, Delbert did the same. Then they saw Jim uncurling the hose and walking to stand by his mother. "
Jim that's just mean!" Delbert said snickering.
Natalie stood up and walked over to the hose faucet. "do you have a better idea?" she asked.
"she has a point there, love." Amelia said, poking delbert playfully in the shoulder.
"I suggest you two get up, that tree is holding your hammock. And I am putting this thing on full power."
Natalie warned. They quickly jumped off the hammock and stood a bit behind Jim
"full speed ahead!"
Jim shouted, which didn't disturb a snoring Sarah. Natalie happily turned the faucet and went to stand by her adoptive parents. Jim let the water flow then, he put his thumb over half the hose and sprayed Sarah with the concentrated stream. She immidetly jumped up, screaming at the ice cold blast, franticly trying to stop the stream of water with her hands.
"JIM stop it, STOP!….. JIIIIM!" she screamed.
Jim laughed but didn't stop.
"ok, James I think you've made your mother suffer enough, stop the water Natalie"
Amelia said trying not to laugh to much at her friend. Natalie reluctantly turned off the water. In front of them stood a very wet, very cold, and very, very angry Sarah Hawkins.
"oh my god Jim, what the heck what that for?"
she cried furiously ringing out her hair. Everyone shrugged.
"board"
they all answered at the same time. Which annoyed the heck out of Sarah. She walked over to Jim, and shook off a large amount of the water that still remained on her body.
"hey!"
Jim yelled annoyed. What he didn't see was Amelia sneaking up behind him. She put her finger to her lips, signaling Sarah. She continued to creep up on him until she was right behind him. Then with a great force pushed him forward.
"AHHHH!"
he cried before landing face first in the mud the hose had caused. Everyone was laughing like crazy nuts. he ripped his head up from the wet earth and glared angrily at Amelia. Who in return shrugged.
"oops, I slipped sorry James!"
he shook his head standing up and wiping the mud from his face.
"not funny!"
he growled pointing at Amelia. She shook her head
"touch me with that finger James, and you'll get cleaned off by you mothers wake up call"
he stopped pointing, he knew how cold that hose water was. "ok, enough then. You both know of the shower in the basement."
both Sarah and Jim nodded and started walking. Then Sarah stopped and turned around.
"I will get something that will fit you Sarah, Jim still has that spare pair of pants and shirt that he left here last week."
Amelia informed her heading for the house followed by a laughing Natalie, and a smiling Delbert. She retrieved the cloths for both humans and waited in the living room. After 15 minutes they both returned. Dressed in dry cloths.
"ok that was fun, but I am still BOOOOARD!"
Natalie complained again. Amelia whacked her on the head with the T.V remote
"ow!"
she said holding her head, she looked at Amelia.
"what the heck was that for?"
"still bored?"
"yeah" Amelia leaned back in her chair.
"so am I, what should we do?"
she looked at everyone, who were all smashed into the couch.
"suggestions?" she asked.
The room was quiet for about 10 minutes. Then Jim snapped his fingers.
"I got an idea!"
he exclaimed jumping up and running to another room, a minute later he returned with a brochure in his hands. "we could plan a vacation!"
"not a bad idea!"
Delbert agreed. He glanced at Amelia, who smiled no one but them knew what they were thinking.
"but where Jim, and ain't it expensive to plan a vacation?"
Natalie asked standing by Jim. "isn't dear ain't is not a word" Amelia corrected her.
Natalie rolled her eyes
"perfectionist"
she mumbled under her breath.
"we can go here, it's a nice place, and their cheap"
Jim said showing the brochure to everyone a place called harminsia was the resort it wasn't vary fancy, but it was tropical and nice.
"oh look! They have rock climbing!"
Amelia exclaimed excitedly, she loved rock climbing. Even though she had only experienced it once, and not under the best circumstances. Considering she was being chased by a secret assian organization at the time.
"yes and it is reasonably priced!" Sarah added
Jim and Natalie looked at each other excited. The adults all looked at each other then the children.
"pack up your swimsuit dear, were going to harminsia!" Amelia declared loudly.
Jim and Natalie jumped up and down excitedly. And Natalie rushed upstairs to pack.
"we should start packing as well Jim, goodbye Amelia, Delbert I will pay for half!"
Sarah shouted over her shoulder as her and Jim rushed out the door. Amelia and Delbert went to start packing as well, they were all ready for some rest and relaxation, but the kind were you have something to do. What they didn't know, wouldn't kill them right? Right?
what they don't know won't kill them right?... no it won't it will just cause them extream emotionel trama! but the funny kind. what will happen? will this just be a normal family/friend vacation, fun in the sun, relaxation, pranks, or... find out more in the next chapter! R&R!