So here's my new story. Yeah I know I'm still updating the other one, but I just finished this today and REALLY wanted to publish it...so here it is I guess. I only own Comet. AgentHanstran511 owns Marcy. MARVEL owns everyone else, and the Negative Zone.

Ch. 1

The hot hand down my back woke me up.

"Hey babe" Johnny whispered, running his hand down my back again.

"Morning Johnny" I replied, snuggling deeper into his warm embrace.

"Someone's cuddly this morning" he teased.

"I'm just really comfortable" I defended, wrapping my arms around his chest, pressing our stomachs together. Johnny chuckled and wrapped his arms around my neck.

"I know" he said. I smiled and inhaled his ashy scent before remembering everything I had to do today. I pulled away and swung my legs out, getting up.

"Today's the day you and Marcy are traveling to the Negative Zone isn't it?" Johnny asked, sitting up.

"Yeah it is" I sighed. Reed had found what he named 'The Negative Zone' because it was made of antimatter and needed two people to travel to it. He estimated we'd be gone for about five hours on the trip.

"I'm gonna go shower" I said, heading to the bathroom connected to the room I share with Johnny. I turned the shower on as hot as it would go (not that it was any hotter than Johnny) and stripped down, stepping into the shower. A few minutes after I stepped in, Johnny showed up. I jumped in surprise when the hot lips touched my neck.

"Did I ever tell you how much I love you?" Johny wondered, running his hands down my body.

"Everyday" I replied, turning around to kiss him.

"Oh yeah...I have" he said. I rolled my eyes and lightly hit his bare chest.

"Silly boy" I teased. Johnny smirked and I kissed him.

"That smirk is so hot" I whispered.

"I'm glad you think so" he replied, kissing me back...we got out of the shower a little while later and I pulled on some clothes, sticking my phone and iPod into my bra.

"Why do girls stick everything into their bras" Johnny asked, sitting on the bed and watching.

"Because its the safest place for stuff" I replied.

"Why though?" he asked.

"Most guys aren't going to reach into a girl's bra, and if they do then they'd get slapped or smacked or physically injured somehow" I replied matter-of-factly. Johnny laughed and pulled me into a big hug.

"I'm gonna miss you" he said. I wrapped my arms around him and hugged him fiercely.

"I'm gonna miss you too" I said, resting my cheek on his chest.

"I love you" Johnny whispered.

"I love you" I replied, snuggling close to him.

"Five hours" Johnny sighed.

"I know. But then I'll be back" I said.

"Lets go" Johnny said, grabbing my hand and pulling me to the living room.

"Ready for this?" Marcy asked me.

"As ready as anyone could be" I said.

"When you get there, collect samples of antimatter to bring back using your powers" Reed commanded.

"Yes sir ma'am...sir" Marcy said. Everyone but Reed laughed.

"Now go" he said, slightly shoving us to the portal-maker-thing. Marcy and I exchanged a look and stepped into it. There was a flash of blinding white light, forcing me to close my eyes.

"I think something went wrong..." Marcy said. I opened my eyes to see we were in a grassy forest-type area.

"Where the h*** are we?" I wondered. Marcy shrugged.

"Lets go see" she suggested. I nodded and we flew off.

"Isn't that the Baxter Building" Marcy asked, pointing to a building in the distance.

"Looks like it" I replied, landing. Marcy followed me and we walked into the building.

"Welcome back Ms. Storm and Ms. Storm" the doorman, Kevin, greeted.

"Odd" I muttered as we walked to the elevator. Marcy was the only 'Ms. Storm" and yet he called us both 'Ms. Storm'. The ride up to the top was quiet, neither of us speaking.

"Reed? Sue?" Marcy called into the building. Reed and Sue walked out to meet us.

"So how was shopping?" Reed asked.

"We didn't go shopping" Marcy said.

"Yeah you did...bye the way, nice change of clothes Comet" Sue said. I looked at what I was wearing, a pink tank top and a pair of jeans, exactly what I put on after my shower.

"This is exactly what I put on this morning" I said. Reed and Sue looked at me like I was crazy.

"This morning you put on black jeans and a dark purple top" Reed said. I looked at Marcy as Ben walked in. Somehow, in the short time (well hour) we were gone, he had returned to normal and was about three years younger.

"Comet!" he shouted, running to me and hugging me. I hugged him back he (totally surprising me) tried to kiss me. Automatically, I twisted his arm and flipped him to the ground.

"What the H***?!" I asked.

"He's your boyfriend, remember?" Sue asked. Marcy and I looked at each other as Johnny walked in.

Oh boy. Well if Comet isn't with Johnny, then who is. You'll find out in the next chapter. REview.