A/N: Hello everybody:) I just got back from seeing Deathly Hallows part 2, and I was spellbound by it! As much as I love Harry, Snape stole the show for me. Alan Rickman is superb and performed Snape's death so well, I was nearly in tears:( His expression as he begged Harry to take his memories, and oh my god, when he cradled Lily, I was bawling by that point. Anyway, I was inspired to write a dedication to Snape and his unrequited love for Lily. I hope you enjoy it. I am stressing for reviews because this is rather important to me and I want feedback on my poetry. Thanks, enjoy!
Always
Moonlight shows me the way
As I walk through trees of a winter night
A whisper of the past lingers on the wind
Your voice haunts me as I tread
You were my star, a light in the darkness of the night
Green eyes are all I see as I fall, my sins coil all around
Look at me
Let those eyes be all I see
A love unreturned by you, I craved you with all I was
I cradled a hollow shell of who you used to be,
The closest I ever came to an embrace
I will love you for all time,
Always
No one could ever know you held my heart
I fought for your memory, for what you left behind
And as I lay here, I wish to see you once again
Perhaps we'll meet in another life
Where you'll be mine
Let those eyes be my last sight
THANKS FOR READING, PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT THE POEM :)
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