i swear to all the fucking gods in the univers if i get one motherfucking flame about my lack of a long chapter punctuation errors of grammer(i use spell check just FYI) i am going to report every one of you littl bitches. i'm only going to say this once DON'T LIKE DONT READ!
kami was tired, tired of watching here favirot mortal naruto uzumaki get beatean heald by the kyuubi then walking home to the glares and shouts of deamon and the death threats that would be fufiled the next day geting to his apartment and crying becuas he didnt know why they did this to him and thinking he really was a deamon he was only 3 yeas old for the love of shio sama but this was worse he was being beatin to death and their wasent a damn thing she could do about it becuas despite what mortals thought she was not the cheif godesses that would be shio she was the creater of this univers but kami was the creater of life. but speak of the devil here she was right now
"shio-sama what may i do for you" kami asked in a very respectful tone
"i see your are watching the uzumaki boy agin what do you see in him he a mer mortal and you an immortal godess" shio asked curios what her daughter saw in this mortal
"look at what is hapening right now these pathetic humans are beating him to death and when you look in side his mind as i do every day all you see is sadness for these humans and he wants to protect them and earn their respect thier is no malic no hatred not a single shred of any form of hatred his soul is the purist i have ever seen in my immortal life not even the sage of the six paths had a soul this pure" kami said with such convictin you would think she was a texan talking about beer football hunting and fishing(no offens to texans)
"good the that makes my discison even esieri am going to make naruto uzumaki the most powerfull being that will ever exist. i think kyu-chan wants to save him help"
earth naruto's beating
naruto was in so much pain right now that it was undescribubal they were beating him stabing him slowly so he felt every minut of excrutiating pain then he blacked out. he awoke in what looked like a sewer with pipes all around him each corridore and passegway looked the same but he had a feeling pulling him in the direction he needed to go once he tried to go the opposit deirection but the feeling got so strong that it hurt his head so he did as the feeiling told him to
he followed it for hours then he arrievd at his destination. the room was huge so huge that he couldent see the ceiling dommonating the room was a giant cage that held the infomas nin taild fox naruto was frightend here stood the mighty nin taild fox that not three years ago allmost destroyed the villiage
"you dont need to be frightend of me young one i will not hurt you" the kyuubi said
"were am i?l" naruto asked calming down "you are in your mind scape young one this is were all your thoughts and memories are stored for you to review and experiance. But since i have slept for so long i have reviewd your memories and have exsperianced all that you have" naruto thought about it but noticed somthing about kyuubi's voice and the way he seemed to care
"kyuubi are you a girl ?" kyuubi stared at naruto like what the fuck
"what the fuck naruto never with any other container has geused that i kyuubi no yoko am queen of the demon races. not that it matters" kyuubi said but naruto was confused becuas she siad it dident matter
" kyuubi-chan what do you mean that it's not going to matter" naruto said confused but kyuubi woldan't look at him muttering
" naruto you came here becuas you blacked out and you are now here but those humans continude to beat you your brain was dammeged and so now you are dying and their is nothing i can do about it" kyuubi said sadley but said the word human with such venom that it shocked young naruto
" so this is how i will die hm not the worst way to go at least a gave'em a hell of a fight" and that he did he killd 6 of his attakers before they maneged to beat him into uncocisnos naruto was sad for the villigers thou he now knew why they hated him
"heheheeheheheheheheheheh kyuubi-chan dont be so shure that our young naruto-kun is going to die i belive that we can strike a deal for young naruto-kun's life dont you think" a voice that was distinctley fimminenn frome every were and nowere at the same time. naruto wonderd what this deal was and how it would bennifet him
" pleas show your self so that we can negotiate terms that would bennefet us both"
"well that is certinley interesting okay naruto-kun but i will have to take you to my boss shio who will give you the terms" naruto closed his eyes in preporation for the teleportation as he assumed that they would not be coming down to the kyuubi's cage so he waited and he waited until
"naruto-kun you can open your eyes now it's time to strike a deal" naruto opend his eyes to find 8 wemon the first was a littl shot at 5'4 she had pale blond hair tin a bun with strands hanging outshe was wearing a very exspencive looking kimono that was plain wihte her face was soft and round with bright green eyes that spoke of kindness and tranqillity she had massive J cup breasts and from what he could see a very firm but bouncy ass their was a smile on here face as she talked
"hello naruto-kun i am kami but you may call me vena"
" hello vena-chan i would like to get straight to buissness if you woulden't mind i dont want to run out of time" naruto smilled wile his weyes roamd here body. hey he was a man too
" hehehehehehehehehehe silly naruto-kun i'm not the one who will be brokering our deal i'm just here to make sur you understand that no matter what you will be a GOD in every sense of the word" kami said with a smille on her face " i have a condition vena-chan i want hinata hayuga to come with me and share in all my powers and abilities.
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